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Nofear
April 14, 2003 2:52 PM

Hi, i'm new here. Read my damn comics please and tell me if there is anything just a little bit funny here.

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User #27050
April 14, 2003 3:17 PM

THOSE MADE ME LAUGH TIL I FEELL OFF THE HOOK! RING RING!

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not_Scyess
April 14, 2003 3:49 PM

Amateurish, but pretty good. All you need to do is refine your style (pay attention to spelling & grammar, know when to end a joke, stop relying on stock-art sight gags). Still, I laughed at more than one.

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Nofear
April 14, 2003 4:19 PM

Ok thanks for the advice. Can you just tell me what "stock-art sight gags" means please, as I am new to this phrase. Thanks again.

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Nofear
April 14, 2003 4:43 PM

Ah shit i see what you mean not_Scyess. Ive fucking missed a "do" out of my Dave has issues strip and I can't change it:(

God I'm a twat sometimes

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User #25191
April 15, 2003 3:08 AM

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Can you just tell me what "stock-art sight gags" means please, as I am new to this phrase.

By "stock-art sight gags" he means you should die of cholera.

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TheSecretSociety
April 15, 2003 4:37 PM

Fairly decent stuff man. Not the best, but it's definately not the worst. I agree with not_Scyess with the fact that you should try to always keep punctuation marks in your sentences. Sometimes it can distract from your comics a bit if you choose to leave them out.

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Nofear
April 15, 2003 5:13 PM

Ok thanks for the feedback, this was my first atempt and i may donate so that i can go back and change them.

Thanks for the advice. Nofear

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User #25191
April 15, 2003 5:28 PM

why the fuck haven't you died of cholera yet

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andydougan
April 15, 2003 7:05 PM

"What's twisting that bitch's tit?" did it for me. Good work.

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