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DMSO April 16, 2003 6:24 PM	Finally I have gotten my shit together and made some more comics. Frankly, I think they're pretty shoddy, but they were only supposed to be an introduction to some superhero strips I intend to make. I just got carried away, and found myself vulgarly ripping off a classic film. Tell me what you think, anyway... 137777 137778 137780 137792 137793 137794 137805 137809 137811 137817 137818 137819
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evil_d April 17, 2003 8:30 AM	The part in the middle where there's those gray panels on either side and about one line of dialogue per strip was a bit awkward, though a creative idea. Aside from that, I liked the series.
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ahrange April 17, 2003 3:13 PM	Not bad.
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DMSO
April 17, 2003 4:50 PM

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The part in the middle where there's those gray panels on either side and about one line of dialogue per strip was a bit awkward, though a creative idea. Aside from that, I liked the series.

I was trying to show the rest of the doctor's office, but I'd chosen a stupid background that wouldn't work over multiple panels. The 'strip as single large panel' thing worked ok in the restaurant scenes of my 'AutoMate' series, but I admit it wasn't so effective here.

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Choobychooby April 17, 2003 5:39 PM	Excellent, I love 'em.
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