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Alias June 5, 2003 9:32 AM	/me = total n00b to this site. But it is way too much fun... not to mention addictive! Anyway, even though these really aren't "ha-ha" funny. Hope you enjoy... :D 150078 First one was just testing schtuff out, hopefully can only get better with time...
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MaxPayne June 5, 2003 11:40 AM	Hopefully
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MaxPayne June 5, 2003 11:43 AM	One definate way to improve your comics is to maybe make one that DOESN'T have the phone going ring ring ring in the left of every panel.
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Alias June 5, 2003 12:10 PM	...ya think? cuz that's about the only noise a phone usually makes... ;)
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Trippingbillee June 5, 2003 5:26 PM	Hey, Alias. I agree with Max. It gets quite annoying. Also, this is a tip I always give. I find that using good grammar and punctuation can really help clear up the comic. I can't explain why, but it seems to me as though it helps with the "timing" of the comic. It may feel weird, but give it a shot.
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MaxPayne June 5, 2003 10:13 PM	quote: ...ya think? cuz that's about the only noise a phone usually makes... ;) That and you can have dialogue coming out of the phone to represent someone on the other line that the character we CAN see is speaking to. But you're the know-it-all, so nevermind.
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MaxPayne June 5, 2003 10:20 PM	Observe 133954
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Alias
June 6, 2003 8:57 AM

The whole idea was that he was/is just talking to the phone. Doesn't really matter who's calling, could be anyone - from a telemarketer to his Grandma Fluffy. Just a non-stop ringing that this guy replies to. Again, not meant to be "lol" funny.

Next round of it, I'll try to 'set' things up better, I just assumed anyone who read it would see that he wasn't answering the phone.

Alias - know it all ;)

Ever read I-Gregory?

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