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Joey
July 6, 2003 8:10 PM

Read my comics some are dumb some are really funny.For example 156992 or 156710

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choadwarrior
July 6, 2003 8:16 PM

He's done 93 comics in a day...watch out Boinky, he'll have 1000 strips by next week.

Perhaps one of them will be funny.

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Joey
July 6, 2003 8:24 PM

Lots of them suck and some of them are funny.sorry,sorry.
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Joey
July 6, 2003 8:25 PM

quote:
He's done 93 comics in a day...watch out Boinky, he'll have 1000 strips by next week.

Perhaps one of them will be funny.


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User #16352
July 6, 2003 8:46 PM

quote:
He's done 93 comics in a day...watch out Boinky, he'll have 1000 strips by next week.
Don't you worry about me.

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Inflatable_Man
July 6, 2003 8:49 PM

Chill out a bit. If you put some more thought in to each strip instead of just churning them out by the dozens they might be good. Sorry to be harsh, but you'll win more respect from doing one good strip than a hundred cruddy ones.

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Bargaintuan
July 6, 2003 9:41 PM

SPACES AFTER PUNCTUATION!
SPACES AFTER PUNCTUATION!!!

That is all.

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not_Scyess
July 6, 2003 9:43 PM

Good advice, Inflate-o. were almost funny, but you should take more time to think though what people who aren't you think. Don't leave the joke so open that only you understand it, but don't explain it so much it's not funny.

Don't worry. Another few days and another few gross comics and you'll probably get it.

Oh, and I've been the cunt of the day for two days in a row now! I have a feeling I've got a good chance at tomorrow, too. Eat your hearts out, fellas.

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User #16352
July 6, 2003 9:46 PM

I'm keeping you a little longer because I put you in late in the day......cunt.

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evil_d
July 6, 2003 11:17 PM

This one was much, much funnier when Penny Arcade did it. If you're going to steal someone's joke word-for-word, at least give them credit.

The other strips you posted, assuming they're your own, show some hope. They're not funny, but they suggest that you might start producing funny strips at some point in the future. Comics like A day in hell show that you know not to say more than is necessary. Ronnie on smack#3 is my favorite so far.

Keep at it. Welcome to Stripcreator.

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User #16352
July 6, 2003 11:29 PM

I actually like some of his comics. Most people's first comics aren't great. Mine for example.

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Joey
July 7, 2003 8:11 AM

I did steal that one from Penny arcade,but like the comic says...157057 Translated:We're like Penny-arcade,but we suck.Oh and thats not supposed to be funny,it's made to prove a point.

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Joey
July 7, 2003 8:13 AM

And no, that gag I changed alot.

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Joey
July 7, 2003 8:17 AM

And hell,this one is a Penny-arcade comic.156818

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Joey
July 7, 2003 8:26 AM

I mean,look at Penny-arcade's and look at mine.The concept is the same but the comic aren't.And when I didn't steal other people's ideas I downright sucked.156971156697

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Joey
July 7, 2003 8:45 AM

I even stole I charater and name from south park.

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CrunchyCheese
July 7, 2003 8:52 AM

here's a suggestion:

Write your dialogue, load it into Word, or your e-mail program, and run a fucking spell-check before posting. Even if there is a glimmer of hope, the illiteracy usually suffocates it.

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Joey
July 7, 2003 8:58 AM

Yeah,...,err.,.,.,.,thanks i'll look into that.156955

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Joey
July 7, 2003 9:02 AM

And I ask you only to read the comics I post here I am not a donor,so I can not delete my comics.

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Joey
July 7, 2003 10:00 AM

156916

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codehappykid
July 7, 2003 10:24 AM

Don't put yourself down, Joey.
...no really, don't. Self-deprecation taken too far is one reason why I bypass a lot of new stripcreators. Your stuff's good, could be better but so could mine...just don't talk about how much you suck, or else you'll make it true.
Keep posting comics, d00d.

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DangerCat
July 7, 2003 11:47 AM

Your comics are okay, I won't go off subject and tear you to bits for misspelling or stuff like that.

"Cunt of The Day" is hilarious, Boinky, good idea.

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Bargaintuan
July 7, 2003 11:59 AM

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I mean,look at Penny-arcade's and look at mine.The concept is the same but the comic aren't.And when I didn't steal other people's ideas I downright sucked.

Spaces after punctuation. :-P

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Joey
July 7, 2003 12:16 PM

157193

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Bargaintuan
July 7, 2003 9:20 PM

*sigh*

Youmightaswellforgetthespacesaltogether,becauseIwon'tbereadingyourcomicsanymore.

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Joey
July 13, 2003 5:09 PM

sorry 159005

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