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JudgeMeHarshX
July 8, 2003 6:24 PM

This is the only decent one that's been made in the past three days.

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andydougan
July 8, 2003 7:03 PM

That was quite good. But I don't think the robot should say "I see your point".

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choadwarrior
July 8, 2003 8:24 PM

I agree with andydougan on both points.

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Bargaintuan
July 8, 2003 9:08 PM

quote:
That was quite good. But I don't think the robot should say "I see your point".

I see your point.

Also, two sentences ending in "again" in the second panel is kinda awkward. Keep 'em coming, though.

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JudgeMeHarshX
July 9, 2003 2:29 AM

Hm...thanks for the insight, guys. I was going to keep the robot silent in the last panel, but I decided he needed to say something...because I'm a fool, you see. Heh.

Also, I have another decent one up:

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not_Scyess
July 9, 2003 1:29 PM

The third panel could've been more eloquent, but overall it was a decent comic.

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Rabid_Weasle
July 9, 2003 7:10 PM

I'll just assume the last panel with him him putting a nail in his head was a screw-up...

So I'll say good comic.

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JudgeMeHarshX
July 11, 2003 3:36 AM

The nail in the head made sense to me at the time, but it was about five in the morning with no sleep for the past few days, so I can see how it was lost. I'm all rested up now...you're right, it doesn't make as much sense.

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