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Aw come on, fellas.
Okay, fine.
How were the comics that I wrote on the 7th of april?
You want feedback?
They served their purpose. That is, no one can make a bad-stand-up-comic strip that will rank with Shakespeare, but most of us write a few anyway. Those fit preetty well into that series (especially #1).
The base jumper strip is worth a giggle (IIRC, BASE stands for bridges, antennas, structures and embankments), but Panel 2 could have probably been improved by using clouds1 background and showing Roger instead of Maura. Just having height2 say the text is kind of weak.
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