The punchline in #6 of your series made me laugh out loud. I read some of Noonie's stuff as well. How do you get comics funny without having to curse all the ****ing time?
It's hit and miss for me. For every comic I make that actually provokes laughter, there are several that elicit groans of horror and dismay, even in babies.
I also use lots of profanity in many of my comics, but it seemed to work against these particular ones.
Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.