It's been a long while since I had fun here making comic strips.  I'm so pleased to see the new office backgrounds and characters.  The sharp clean lines are very pleasing to the eyes.

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seems like a 'slice of life vignette' for the office subculture

Part four sums up my mentality to office work. Bravo

If you remove all the yellow narration boxes from every comic, you'll find they not only don't lose anything, but they become much better.  If you do that, they have potential.

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not_Scyess wrote:

If you remove all the yellow narration boxes from every comic, you'll find they not only don't lose anything, but they become much better.  If you do that, they have potential.

 

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I think you're right.  Thanks.  I'll see about editing those strips.

Oh, yes.  Much better without the yellow boxes of narration.  Thanks again for the suggestion.

It's like a 492.3 lb. weight has been removed from your comics.

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It's like a 492.3 lb. weight has been removed from your comics.

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Just a tip, Jeanster: You can go ahead and use yellow boxes while you're making the comics if it helps you focus. Then right before you save the comic, delete them all! Voila!

Except the useful expository ones that say stuff like "Later that month..." or "Forty years later..."  or "Meanwhile, on Mars..."  Those are acceptable.

And never go for more than two lines in a yellow box, that distracts some and bores others, and leaves less room for dialog.

Oh wait, I'm known for my huge-ass caption boxes. Nevermind, carry on.