Please view and reply, I hope it's good.

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A good rule of thumb is if you have to hope, it generally isnt.

however it shows the right pattern of a joke so no penalties there.

funnier than some things I have.

keep on keepin on man.

fleury29,

in the last panel, it has "Flue my ..."

Was that an intentional spelling for the first letter

of the first word?  Would you have rather used a

dialogue bubble instead of the thought bubble for

the man in the last panel?  I think the stretched out

scene in the last panel makes a pretty picture/pattern,

regardless of how it adds to your comic.  "You've gone

where few panels have gone before."