Thank you for the input i will work on that i always get these great ideas for comics but then when i get ready to make them either the set up doesn't work or the punchline is hard top put in three panels...
--- Resident Masochist & Adrenaline Junkie
-I'm probably not god but you should worship me just in case-
I need a successful seduce check here or I'll never be able to enter the Chamber of Secrets
This is a real challenge...I'm gonna drink a whiskey potion for plus 50 to courage
Hmm maybe I should drink a potion of charisma to improve my chances as well
Just **** me already
Heres a comic from my lastest series Lord Of The Nerds
By far the funniest one so far. I agree with the other poster about your punchlines. Some of them are just a little soft. The set up is always pretty good/interesting. I do the same thing sometimes--come up with an "interesting" comic that isn't necessarily funny.
IMO, punchlines work best in comics where the characters don't totally agree with/understand each other. For example, the nerd trying to have sex is in a completely different world from the girl. Once you have that little difference in the characters, the punchline goes to whichever character you want to "win" the conversation. "Just **** me already" is funny because it totally defeats the nerd's RPG babbling.