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Lord_Vodek
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11-19-09 7:22pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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Nothing guys? I just want to know what you like and don't like...Don't forget to rate and comment...

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11-28-09 12:45pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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Lord_Vodek
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12-02-09 9:31pm (new)
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Hari_Nezumi
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I want to like your comics. Most have a good set-up or idea about them, but most of them fail to deliver, punch-line wise. I'm not saying they're bad, but I think you need to work on your...humor.

 

Few good ones in there. Rated you a solid "Okay"

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12-03-09 3:25am (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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Thank you for the input i will work on that i always get these great ideas for comics but then when i get ready to make them either the set up doesn't work or the punchline is hard top put in three panels...

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12-03-09 8:12pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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12-11-09 5:56pm (new)
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monkeyknifefight
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Lord_Vodek wrote:

Lord Of The Nerds by Lord_Vodek
12-11-09
I need a successful seduce check here or I'll never be able to enter the Chamber of Secrets
This is a real challenge...I'm gonna drink a whiskey potion for plus 50 to courage
Hmm maybe I should drink a potion of charisma to improve my chances as well
Just **** me already

Heres a comic from my lastest series Lord Of The Nerds


 By far the funniest one so far. I agree with the other poster about your punchlines. Some of them are just a little soft. The set up is always pretty good/interesting. I do the same thing sometimes--come up with an "interesting" comic that isn't necessarily funny.

 IMO, punchlines work best in comics where the characters don't totally agree with/understand each other. For example, the nerd trying to have sex is in a completely different world from the girl. Once you have that little difference in the characters, the punchline goes to whichever character you want to "win" the conversation. "Just **** me already" is funny because it totally defeats the nerd's RPG babbling.

 Just my take on things. Hope it helps.

 MKF

12-15-09 2:08pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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Very helpfull glad you liked it i'm always trying to improve

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12-15-09 4:04pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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The Beech by Lord_Vodek
12-14-09
Christ I'm horny
Hi I'm Alice
Oh sweet jesus let's ****
Sorry but no
Why not
I went Les 45 seconds ago

Your thoughts and opinions?

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12-15-09 4:09pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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RATE THE DAMN COMICS

 
The Beech by Lord_Vodek
12-14-09
Christ I'm horny
Hi I'm Alice
Oh sweet jesus let's ****
Sorry but no
Why not
I went Les 45 seconds ago

 

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12-27-09 10:06pm (new)
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AngryAmerican
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The punchline for Lord of the Nerds brought the whole thing together.

Well done.

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Kill Whitey.

12-28-09 1:17am (new)
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Lord_Vodek
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12-29-09 10:19pm (new)
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ragu4u
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Only the good ninjas are white?  A slippery slope.

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12-30-09 8:37am (new)
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not_Scyess
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Lord_Vodek
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not_Scyess
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Lord_Vodek
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