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kola
Stripcreator Newbie

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I have made comics and would like any constructive feedback if anyone should be so kind. thank you in advance!

kola

[Click to view comic: 'Meryl']

 

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NOSEBREATHERS NOSEBREATH LMFAO

11-11-11 1:12pm (new)
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HCRoyall
Can't Brain today, studying for Nursing School

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It was kind of hit or miss.  Some of them made me chuckle, but a lot just fell flat.  It was mostly a case of what seemed like a mismatch of joke and punchline, like the buildup didn't naturally lead to the finish.  For example, I just couldn;t understand where you were going with the comic "Harpoon".

A few of them could be improved, but were still funny.  "AA", for example, would have been better if you used the Melvin image with his eyes wide in the last panel, but it still had humor to it. 

I get the feeling you're just hitting the random button and working with whatever it gives you off the top of your head.  This can work sometimes, but it's not a particularly effective long-term method.

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s **** robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.

11-11-11 6:24pm (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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I read all of your comics.  While I agree with the above post, I found many of your comics to be clever and amusing.  Here are some examples:

[Click to view comic: 'rent']

[Click to view comic: 'awesome']

[Click to view comic: 'little fellow']

[Click to view comic: 'hammer']

[Click to view comic: 'doug & mrs franks']

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

11-11-11 10:13pm (new)
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choadwarrior
Crash Magnet

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I enjoyed Rent (the comic, not the musical).  Like many new users, you fall into the narration trap.  This comic would be funnier without the narration since the reader can figure out the slip-up without it.  You're pretty much telegraphing the punchline, it's better if you work up to it.  Otherwise, some decent funny here.  Keep at it and welcome to Stripcreator.

[Click to view comic: 'rent']

11-12-11 11:32am (new)
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JedShepherd
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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doug and mrs frank strip worked really well. i would have left the 2nd panel blank for a dramatic pause though. 

11-26-11 9:05am (new)
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