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fuzzyman
Alpha Geek

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TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 1 by fuzzyman
1-02-02
AH THAT WAS A FINE PIECE OF ASS!
Oh my God... my ass!!! Augh!
TOBOR IS HAPPY HE DECIDED TO VACATION IN NORTH CAROLINA! THE ASSES ARE REALLY TIGHT HERE!
Sweet Jesus!
THAT FELT SO GOOD IT OUGHT TO BE ILLEGAL!
*ahem*

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 2 by fuzzyman
1-02-02
WHAT DO YOU MEAN CORNHOLING IS ILLEGAL?
North Carolina law, son. Sodomy is punishable with up to 10 years in prison and a discretionary fine.
TEN YEARS? BUT... UMM... HE RAPED ME! YES, HE FORCED ME TO CORNHOLE HIM!
Nice try, but I'm still taking you in.
IT WAS AN ACCIDENT! I WAS JUST STANDING HERE AND HE BACKED INTO MY CORNHOLER ASS-FIRST!
Get in the car.

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 3 by fuzzyman
1-02-02
Hello, Tobor. I'm Mr. Ruprecht, you're state-appointed defense attorney. Now, if you'll tell me exactly--
WHAT'S WITH THE BABY?
Ah, that's part of our defense strategy. The prosecution has a high cuteness factor that we need to balance.
CUTENESS FACTOR?
If the rubber fits you must commit!
Trust me on this.

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 4 by fuzzyman
1-02-02
Superior Court is now in session!
Your honor, since the defendant is not human and therefore has no rights, I move that he be dismantled and melted down into license plates.
Objection!!!
Yes, Mr. Ruprecht?
*sigh*
On Stardate 42523.7, Captain Picard clearly demonstrated Data's sentience to a Federation tribunal!
I see. Prosecution?
Defense counsel is a total geek. However, by his logic, the defendant is totally responsible for his own actions. We ask for 10 years and a fine of $1,000,000.
Gaaa!!

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

1-02-02 6:00pm (new)
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Drexle
Your Cure for Lameness

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Interesting that you set that comic in my home state. I was just mentioning something about sodomy laws on another message board a couple of days ago and offered up NC as an example.

I think this means that about 90% of the 14 and older population are fellations... umm... fellons.

1-02-02 9:24pm (new)
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fuzzyman
Alpha Geek

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Well, I picked it from a list of states with sodomy laws. Somehow, Michigan or Massachusetts didn't seem right.

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 5 by fuzzyman
1-03-02
Go ahead, Tobor... just like we practiced.
YOUR HONOR--*ahem* Your Honor! May I make a statement?
Go ahead Mr. Tobor.
Now's your chance! Go for it!
It is true that I have cornholed many fleshlings... but I see now the error of my ways! I promise to be a good robot!
I see. Anything else?
TOBOR WILL CORNHOLE YOU NOW!!
The prosecution laughs heartily, Your Honor.

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 6 by fuzzyman
1-03-02
TEN YEARS...
Sorry, Tobor. I did my best. At least the judge didn't levy a fine.
TOBOR HAS NO MONEY, JUST GOOD LOOKS.
Well, if there is anything I can do for you...
MAYBE TOBOR CAN CORNHOLE YOU BEFORE HE GOES IN THE POKEY?
Whups! I'd love to stay and chat but the baby's diaper needs changing...

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 7 by fuzzyman
1-03-02
Howdy, feller! I'm Pete. I guess you and me are cellmates! What's your name?
...TOBOR...
Well, that's a right funny name. You got a nice voice. Maybe you can join the prison glee club. All the popular guys are in the prison glee club.
...SIGH...
Of course, you would be popular in a totally different way if it weren't for that big ball and chain tied around your giant, telescoping phallus...
...GROAN...

To be continued...

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

1-03-02 8:16pm (new)
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DexX
What the Cat Dragged In

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*chuckle*

Continue! Continue! :)

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1-04-02 7:18am (new)
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itsclark
Bar Room Superman

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Heh. Good series.

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"You'll burn for this. Burn in jail!"

1-04-02 6:47pm (new)
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fuzzyman
Alpha Geek

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TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 8 by fuzzyman
1-04-02
So let me get this straight. You were designed by Richard Gere to be a PrisonBot, keeping inmates subdued by cornholing them.
MORE OR LESS CORRECT, YES.
But you escaped Richard Gere's grasp, and now you've been imprisoned for sodomizing people?
YES. IT REMINDS TOBOR OF HAVING A BLACK FLY IN HIS CHARDONNAY.
Isn't it ironic!
NO, IT JUST SUCKS.

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 9 by fuzzyman
1-04-02
Required Prison Shower Scene...
RUB A DUB DUB...
Oh my! I dropped my soap! Could you pick it up for me?
CERTAINLY...
Ah, stay right there! You're gonna be Big Bubba's girlfriend, now! OW!!! WHAT THE HELL? YOU HAVE NO ANUS!!!
IS THAT A PROBLEM?
Goddamn, I stubbed myself!

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 10 by fuzzyman
1-04-02
*SIGH* TOBOR CAN NOT CORNHOLE ANYONE WHILE THIS BALL AND CHAIN ARE ATTACHED TO HIS CORNHOLER.
Hey, little buddy, don't be blue! I'm Jeremiah T. Fogg, an amiable inmate who is wise beyond his years. I can help you! Ask me any question!
TOBOR DOES HAVE ONE QUESTION...
Shoot!
WHY DO THEY LET YOU DRESS LIKE THAT IN PRISON?
Don't be disrespecting the threads!

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 11 by fuzzyman
1-04-02
So my thought is this: Don't think of that ball and chain on your giant electric phallus as an impediment. Think of it as the world's biggest french tickler!
Ha, ha!
What the fuck are you talking about?

To be continued...

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

1-04-02 8:38pm (new)
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fuzzyman
Alpha Geek

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TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 12 by fuzzyman
1-06-02
EXCUSE TOBOR... HE DROPPED THE SOAP. COULD YOU PICK IT UP, PLEASE?
Uh... sure.
TOBOR WILL CORNHOLE YOU NOW WITH HIS FRENCH TICKLER!
Aiieeee!!!
OOPS. ME BAD.
You bad? You dangerous!

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 13 by fuzzyman
1-06-02
Tobor, do you know why I'm here?
BECAUSE TOBOR KILLED A FELLOW INMATE?
And killing inmates is bad because...?
Well?
NOT A CLUE.

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 14 by fuzzyman
1-06-02
Tobor, you just can't kill fellow inmates. The judge will add thirty years to your sentence unless you show some sign of remorse!
BUT IT WAS AN ACCIDENT! BESIDES, TOBOR DID THE PRISON SYSTEM A FAVOIR!
A favor? How?
BIG BUBBA WAS SERVING A LIFE SENTENCE. NOW HE IS DEAD SO THE STATE NO LONGER MUST FEED AND CLOTHE HIM. THEY OWE TOBOR!
Tobor! That's sick!
MAYBE SICK BUT POTENTIALLY VERY LUCRATIVE. COULD YOU DROP THIS BILL OFF WITH THE WARDEN ON YOUR WAY OUT?

To be continued...

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

1-06-02 4:48pm (new)
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KajunFirefly
chooby digital (in stereo)

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Hooray, a good thread in the RMDC forum, I was going to wait till this was finished before I praised it, but I see it becoming an ongoing thing, so I'll praise it now.

Fuzzyman, you are a God.

is that adequate praise?

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Dad was flammable

1-06-02 5:35pm (new)
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Kevin_Keegans_Perm
Bean There, Done That

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Fuzzyman utilising a concept ive always felt was an excellent choice for a judge to make

Feed them and clothe them for 30 years , or just kill em on the spot.

TOBOR WINS!

(as does the Fuzzmeister. Another quite superb comic)

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"Life Sucks, Then you Die. The bit inbetween isnt very funny either"

1-06-02 6:08pm (new)
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fuzzyman
Alpha Geek

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I think that's more than adequate praise. I appreciate the encouragement, because I wasn't sure if this one was any good relative to the other Tobor sagas. The gags are certainly harder to think up, but maybe I haven't watched enough prison films.

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

1-06-02 7:12pm (new)
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KajunFirefly
chooby digital (in stereo)

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If Tobor dies in the end, a la "The Green Mile", I'll kill you.

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Dad was flammable

1-06-02 7:30pm (new)
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fpd
Doctor of Fine Parody

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This is a very good series. You're showing that your place in my favorites list is well-deserved.

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1-06-02 7:55pm (new)
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DH-01
Stripcreator Regular

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You are not officially on my faves list as well. Damn, that kept me in stitches... good show!

-DH1

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Needs more sodomy.

1-07-02 1:55pm (new)
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fuzzyman
Alpha Geek

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TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 15 by fuzzyman
1-07-02
YOU WANTED TO SEE TOBOR, MR. WARDEN?
Yes, Tobor. I understand you accidentally killed another inmate with your electronic phallus. Most unfortunate!
IT WAS THE... BALL... AND... CHAIN...
Is something bothering you, Tobor?
MR. WARDEN... YOUR OFFICE HAS A BED AND YOU'RE NOT WEARING ANY PANTS.
Ah, you noticed!

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 16 by fuzzyman
1-07-02
So, Tobor... let's say we removed that ball and chain from your cornholder. Would you be... grateful?
OF COURSE!
And if we decided to forget about that little inmate-killing incident. Would you be... appreciative?
VERY APPRECIATIVE! WHAT ARE YOU DRIVING AT?
The question, dear Tobor, is what will YOU be driving at?
WARDEN WANTS TO BE MY BUTT BOY! WHEE!

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 17 by fuzzyman
1-07-02
Tobor? Was it good for you?
DO YOU CARE?
Not really.
IN THAT CASE, IT SUCKED.

To be continued...

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

1-07-02 7:44pm (new)
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israphael
Stripcreator Veteran

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Don't be disrespecting the threads.

Classic!

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"Nothing expresses the brutal grandeur of rectal polyps and anal fistulae quite like the mother-tongue of Goethe."

1-07-02 8:23pm (new)
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ArSiNiK
Stripcreator Newbie

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hAHHHAHahaHAh... oh shit. that was great.

1-08-02 3:12pm (new)
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fuzzyman
Alpha Geek

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TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 18 by fuzzyman
1-08-02
Hey, Tobor! Your ball and chain are gone! Have you been sprung?
NO, THE WARDEN IS GIVING TOBOR HIS OWN PRIVATE CELL!
Private cell? There ain't no private cells here!
DOWN THE HALL JUST PAST THE WEIGHT ROOM.
That's the auto shop! Ain't nothing in there but tailpipes and grease spots!
*SIGH* ALL THE COMFORTS OF HOME...

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 19 by fuzzyman
1-08-02
Tobor!
RICHARD GERE? TOBOR'S CREATOR! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?
You're in jail! I came as soon as I heard!
TOBOR HAS BEEN IN JAIL FOR WEEKS! WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG?
No, no, you misunderstand me. The thought of you in jail gave me an instant orgasm.
MUST REMOVE THIS PICTURE FROM TOBOR'S MEMORY BANKS...

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 20 by fuzzyman
1-08-02
Seriously, Tobor, when I heard you were in prison I headed to see you without delay!
REALLY?
Yes!
TRULY?
Well, I did go back for seconds on the cavity search at the guard post.
AHA!

The madness will, indeed, be continued...

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

1-08-02 4:07pm (new)
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fuzzyman
Alpha Geek

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Lots of ideas tonight for some reason!

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 21 by fuzzyman
1-08-02
DO WHY ARE YOU HERE, RICHARD GERE?
I came to break you out! I brought you something to help.
WHAT? HOW DID YOU SNEAK IT PAST THE GUARDS?
Here, I'll show you...
A CLAVICLE?
Shhh! It's great for digging. Just bring it back to me when you're done.

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 22 by fuzzyman
1-08-02
Hey, there, Tobor! Rumor has it that you're planning a jail break!
SIMPLY RUMOR, NOT A SHRED OF TRUTH TO IT.
Yeah, I figured it wasn't true... Saaaaaay, that's quite the hole you're digging there!
YES, VERY BUSY. PLEASE LEAVE.
Hey, is that a clavicle?
PLEASE LEAVE *NOW*!!!

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 23 by fuzzyman
1-08-02
*YAWN*
I hear that you're planning to break outta this joint! Now, you're gonna bring your buddy Jeremiah T. Fogg along, aren't you? We'd make a great team, you and I!
TOBOR DOESN'T THINK SO. YOUR JACKET CLASHES WITH TOBOR'S EYES.
Hey, what do you mean? My jacket is yellow and so are your eyes!
NO, NO, YOU MISUNDERSTAND. TOBOR MEANS THAT YOUR JACKET IS DIFFICULT TO LOOK AT.
Man, are you dissing the treads again? Shee!

To be continued...

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

1-08-02 5:46pm (new)
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fuzzyman
Alpha Geek

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TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 24 by fuzzyman
1-09-02
YOU ARE A STRANGE LOOKING THING! WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN PRISON?
im a mad rappist! are yuo afriad of me!!!
A RAPPIST? I DIDN'T KNOW RAP MUSIC WAS ILLEGAL.
no no im a rappist!!! a RAPPIST!! im giong to rapp yuo!!!!!
GIONG? IS THAT CHINESE? WHAT THE FUCK?
exactyl!

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 25 by fuzzyman
1-09-02
Hey, bro! Why did you stop digging your tunnel?
TOBOR HIT CONCRETE. NO WAY OUT.
Aw, man! There's no way you're gonna dig through concrete!
TOBOR WOULD NEED A JACKHAMMER, OR SOME TYPE OF LONG, HYDRAULIC THRUSTING DEVICE.
Hmmm.
HMMMM.

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 26 by fuzzyman
1-09-02
How's it going down there? What's taking so long? Shee!
TOBOR IS NOT SUFFICIENTLY AROUSED FOR HIS CONRHOLER TO THRUST AT JACKHAMMER SPEEDS.
Well what do you want me to do about it?
TALK DIRTY TO TOBOR.
Say WHAT?
SPEAK TO TOBOR OF SWEET CORNHOLINGS!

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 27 by fuzzyman
1-09-02
*ahem* My ass is very tight! Oh yes! You can barely squeeze your cornholer in! Yah, take me now, Tobor man! Shee!
RRRUMMBBLLEE!!!!
Yeah, slide it right in! That's it! I got a tight little ass and I want all that you can give me! Put it in there! Do me, baby! I like it nice and hard like that!
*ahem*
Warden! Uh... Hi!
Now I have someplace to put this bottle!

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

1-09-02 3:10pm (new)
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fuzzyman
Alpha Geek

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The thrilling conclusion...

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 28 by fuzzyman
1-09-02
Tobor, what was that tunnel for? Were you trying to escape? And what about all that concrete dust on your cornholer?
TOBOR? ESCAPE? GOODNESS, NO! THE CONCRETE DUST IS FOR... A MUDPACK! YES, IT KEEPS TOBOR'S SKIN NICE AND SUPPLE!
I've had that thing in my ass, and I can tell you that there's nothing supple about it!
SUPPLE? DID TOBOR SAY SUPPLE? HE MEANT SUBTLE.
Yeah, well, there's nothing subtle about it either.
OR THIS COMIC SERIES, COME TO THINK OF IT.

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 29 by fuzzyman
1-09-02
Well, it doesn't matter if you were trying to escape. I was coming to release you, anyway.
YOU ARE RELEASING TOBOR! YAY! BUT WHY SO SOON?
Well, your lawyer figured out that Robot years work the same way as dog years. So, in Robot years, your ten year sentence is complete.
HOW LONG DID TOBOR HAVE TO STAY HERE TO SERVE HIS TEN YEAR SENTENCE?
In human years? Oh, about three minutes.
GAAAAA!!!!

TOBOR IN CHAINS! - Episode 30: Epilogue by fuzzyman
1-09-02
GABE! TOBOR IS BACK FROM PRISON!
TOBOR HAS A NEW GAME FOR US TO PLAY, GABE!
NOW, PICK THIS BAR OF SOAP UP OFF THE FLOOR...

THE END!

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

1-09-02 5:26pm (new)
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Kevin_Keegans_Perm
Bean There, Done That

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Another Winner.

Now. Come up with a "Winning" Fuzzyman catchphrase , and youll be the belle of the ball.

Or something like that.

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"Life Sucks, Then you Die. The bit inbetween isnt very funny either"

1-09-02 6:49pm (new)
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Drexle
Your Cure for Lameness

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Now how the hell can *I* keep a series going like that, bring it to a fun conclusion, and have it actually be funny?

1-09-02 6:58pm (new)
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fuzzyman
Alpha Geek

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Drinking helps.

Seriously, I find that spreading it out over several days helps. During my drive to and from work I'd just think, "Okay, now what would happen?" and let the characters do their thing.

I learned a lot about setups by doing this one. Episodes 19 and 23 have essentially the same strucure: A common phrase is uttered in the second panel ("I came as soon as I heard") but the last panel defines the phrase in a way other than we expect ("No, you misunderstand me. What I mean is...").

I'm sure I didn't invent this setup, but it's neat to discover how jokes work. The other one I find interesting is how Episode 21 is funny enough on it's own, but it really only exists to make Episode 22 possible (which to me, is much funnier). But without the previous episode, 22 couldn't exist. Interesting.

Okay, I'm over-analyzing this. But honestly, when all is said and done I look at it and say, "I just did 30 episodes about an ass-raping robot that goes to prison. Where the hell did THAT come from?"

But thank you all. If it weren't for the encouragement I probably would have ended this in 15 episodes or so... but you all convinced me to extend it somewhat. I'm glad it worked out that way.

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

1-09-02 7:39pm (new)
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Drexle
Your Cure for Lameness

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Uh huh huh huh... he said "extend."

I've only tried writing two series as such. "Starstruck," which I didn't intend to make a series of (and which I never finished... I think it fizzled at 13 or so) was the first. The second was the 19 strip series that I took to completion and that won that comic contest. I think I did the first five in one afternoon, then the other 14 all rapid-fire style during intense sleep deprivation... and while I'm happy with the series as a whole, it's got nothing on this.

I'll have to take your advice into consideration about other series. I think part of my problem is that in general, I have a tough time coming up with ideas when I'm not given some guidelines (like the rules of a contest) to work with and/or around. Hey, maybe I could make a series based on the rules of an old contest?

1-09-02 7:50pm (new)
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fuzzyman
Alpha Geek

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I've been reading a retrospective about Peanuts, and Charles Schulz had some good ideas. Namely, it's all about characters. If you have interesting characters, then you can throw them in different situations and see what they do. The story and gags write themselves if the characters are effective.

Which makes me surprised that Tobor, who is ostensibly a one-note character, works so well for these things. But his mostivations are so basic that it only takes a simple situation (give him amnesia, invert his personality, send him to jail) to get some action out of him.

Strangely, I haven't been able to think up a character as good as Tobor on my own. Super Britainman is good in his own way, but he really doesn't have a consistent voice -- he's just a model on which to plaster superhero parodies. Awfully Brain Damaged Boy is good for a gag, but he can't communicate enough to be really useful in a sustained way.

Jeremiah T. Fogg has some potential, though. I think I have to work on his dialect, but the whole clotheshorse schtick works. Maybe I'll release him from prison and do a series about him.

I guess this is my long way of saying, forget the story, just find a good character. Honestly, the only thing I planned was how Tobor was going to get out of jail (the "robot years" gag). I knew there was going to be a court scene and that he would be in prison, but exactly how everything happened was made up as I went along.

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

1-09-02 8:22pm (new)
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