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evil_d
November 13, 2002 8:54 AM

Last night in #stripcreator, I observed that kaufman's Punderdog had a habit of fighting crime by talking about it in the past tense. Of course that led to something like this. Feel free to expand on the idea.

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Drexle
November 13, 2002 9:02 AM

You are a genius, and I hate you for it.

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kramer_vs_kramer
November 13, 2002 9:14 AM

[this is good]

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boorite
November 13, 2002 9:31 AM

Future perfect.

I know I'll get static for this, but Potential Lad should be grounded.

On behalf of Kali, I give it eight thumbs up!

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Scyess
November 13, 2002 10:06 AM

Wow... I usually make it a point never to make comments in the RMDC forum but this series was bloody great. Outstanding.

Of course, this is coming from a grammar nerd, but I've found that it's best to take praise when you can get it and only ridicule your fans BEHIND their backs.

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kaufman
November 13, 2002 10:14 AM

Pardon my use of the pluperfect subjunctive, but:

SCROD!

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evil_d
November 13, 2002 11:12 AM

I wasn't expecting such a positive response. Thanks, guys.

I looked back at my IRC logs and discovered that it's actually Brad who deserves credit for coming up with the name "Retroactive Man":

[00:15] hey kaufman... can you explain http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?ID=101633 to me?
[00:16] he dammed the torrent without even trying
[00:16] oh... okay.
[00:16] you know, much of his crimefighting seems to be retroactive
[00:17] he always talks about what he did but he never does it... sort of
[00:17] true
[00:17] uses the past tense a lot
[00:17] Retroactive Man.
[00:17] the power of words ;-)
[00:17] that's a great idea for a series, actually
[00:17] Retroactive Man will have come to the rescue!
[00:17] Ha ha,
[00:18] Subjunctive Man might have saved the day.
[00:18] I'm too tired to add anything to this.
[00:19] Double Negative Man might not haven't, etc. Please fill in the rest.
[00:21] Poor Subject-Verb Agreement Man save the day.
[00:24] Captain Monosyllabic says "Grrr." about your obvious rip-offs
[00:25] Captain Obvious gripes about Captain Monosyllabic stepping on his property
[00:25] Potential Lad could save the day.
[00:26] The day was saved by Passive Voice Man.

By the way, kaufman, even after you gave me that explanation, I somehow still didn't really get that strip until earlier today. Now that I do, I think it's pretty funny.

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User #16352
November 13, 2002 11:23 AM

I didn't hate it.
5 mehs.

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fuzzyman
November 13, 2002 6:39 PM

My head hurts.

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WiLzzt
November 14, 2002 1:54 AM

kaufman, scrod is the past pluperfect, not the pluperfect subjunctive - pluperfect subjunctive would be scrowed, continuing that bizarre conjugation.

so NYAAAH you stinky butt!

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kaufman
November 14, 2002 5:45 AM

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kaufman, scrod is the past pluperfect, not the pluperfect subjunctive - pluperfect subjunctive would be scrowed, continuing that bizarre conjugation.
  1. pluperfect means past perfect, so "past pluperfect" is a repetitive redundancy, unless you mean so far in the past that bunner doesn't remember it.

  2. If you don't think "scrod" is the proper pluperfect subjunctive, try telling that to a Boston cabbie.

  3. Speaking of Boston cabbies, a friend of mine once flew up from Georgia to Boston, and on the cab ride from the airport to the hotel, the cabbie asked her why she was in town.

    "I'm here for the Mensa convention," she explained.

    "Mensa, isn't that the organization for smart people?"

    After she confirmed that it was, he asked her where she came from. When she told him Georgia, he was surprised: "But I thought all the people in Georgia were illegitimate."

Disclaimer for the Georgians here: Opinions of the cab driver are not necessarily those of the author.

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3e
November 14, 2002 12:42 PM

HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

excellent.

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DragonXero
November 14, 2002 5:05 PM

It doesn't not even suck at all.
I like it too.
Hear hear!

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evil_d
November 14, 2002 9:41 PM

Because you didn't not ask for it....

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dcomposed
November 14, 2002 9:52 PM

arghh! I havn't replied to this yet?
These are super ass kicking comics.

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User #16352
November 15, 2002 12:24 PM

The also punch ass!

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Drexle
November 15, 2002 1:58 PM

Bwahahahaha!!!

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kaufman
November 15, 2002 9:35 PM

It occurs to me that an episode with Retroactive Man meeting The Artist Formerly Known as Prince might have potential.

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User #16352
November 15, 2002 11:05 PM

He should fight captain obvious.
"I'm shooting you with my ray gun!"

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WiLzzt
November 19, 2002 1:55 AM

moof, my mistake. Past pluperfect is a tense involved in time travel, in speech about a past trip into the future in which both that past and "future" already happened. Conjugating screw into that is beyond me at the moment. Pluperfect subjunctive is right, but I still think it should be "scrowed", boston cabbies be damned.

And in other news, you are pardoned for using the pluperfect subjunctive in the first place.

...

if only there was a little more kaufman in all of us.

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evil_d
November 19, 2002 8:28 AM

Like a Saturday Night Live sketch, the Retroactive Man comics will keep going long after they've stopped being funny. I've got some vague ideas for another series, but for now, here are a couple of one-shots, including the fan-requested meeting with TAFKAP!

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not_Scyess
November 19, 2002 9:41 AM

quote:
And in other news, you are pardoned for using the pluperfect subjunctive in the first place.
Just so I can beat a dead horse a bit more, I was under the impression that only languages like Latin and French even had a "pluperfect." In English it's just called "past perfect," although it means the same. Am I wrong here?

Oh, and by the way this is possibly my favorite series ever created by an sc.com user -- except maybe my CC: 146 entries. And sorry, evil_d, the new ones are still funny, so don't turn in your application for SNL cast member just yet.

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evil_d
April 29, 2003 10:46 PM

Don't say I never did nothin' for ya, boinky.

24 comics is a bit much for the forums, so I'll just give you the first and let you follow the links.

Brush up on the history of Captain Obvious first with deucepm's six-part series The Life of Captain Obvious.

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Drexle
April 29, 2003 11:45 PM

Sigh, Retroactive Man was my hero.

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Scyess
April 30, 2003 10:21 AM

Great comics, as usual. You should quit your job and disown your friends and familly so you can sit at your computer and make more.

Potential Lad is being a bit of a dick, isn't he? 8) What happened to him?

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KajunFirefly
April 30, 2003 11:05 AM

Awful, truly awful.

snerk.

Dunno, why you weren't on my favourites list. Great bunch of serieseses.

Makes me think I should really pull my finger out my ass and make one.

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evil_d
April 30, 2003 11:20 AM

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Potential Lad is being a bit of a dick, isn't he? 8) What happened to him?

A highly improbable time-travelling accident to which no self-respecting science fiction writer would have signed his name (see the second series). The Potential Lad from the first series is now living about a year in the past, before he ever became Potential Lad, and his past counterpart has arrived in the present and had all this superhero business thrust upon him. He's the same person, genetically speaking, but he has no experience with crimefighting and no desire to start, and only stays at the Retro-cave because he can't go home (see latest series).

What happened over the course of the missing year to change that angry, angst-ridden teenager into an idealistic super-sidekick? Why doesn't the Potential Lad who was sent into the past simply show up at the Retro-cave in the present to sort things out? These questions and more will all be answered if I ever decide to write a series about them.

Potential Lad is actually my favorite character here. If I make another series, I'd like to have him figure more prominently in it. But I don't know whether I want to keep the current sarcastic and unwilling Potential Lad (more opportunities for derogatory humor), or to somehow bring back the original starry-eyed sidekick (more opportunities for satire of Golden Age comics, not that I've ever read any). I guess I could do both, but the limit of two characters per panel kind of makes that difficult.

You can tell the two Potential Lads apart by the color of their sweatshirts. The angsty one wears blue. I'd like to pretend that I was already planning for the future when I chose a character that was available in two sets of clothing, but in fact it was a happy accident.

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evil_d
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evil_d
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evil_d
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evil_d
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not_Scyess
February 22, 2010 2:08 PM

I gave this comic series a standing ovation.

Next time, I won't read comics on my iPhone at a funeral.

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