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| What did you think of my new scroll? | |
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| We like the basic framework about the outsider who fights against the corruption of the authorities--it's a very heroic story. | |
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| But what's wrong with it? | |
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| We don't think you should have killed him off--it's testing really low, especially among the pagan demographic. | |
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| I could resurect him after three days and have him promise eternal life to all those who accept him as their saviour. | |
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| Now there's an ending I can sell! | |
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