Pointless and Putrid in Purgatory

Author: dueserpenti

Date: December 1, 2002

by dueserpenti
12-01-02
Our hero asks a friend to critique his new novel.
It's still early, so I'll overlook the obvious cliches.
Which ones?
The "Hooker with a Heart of Gold" is my biggest gripe.
Hey, it's cliched because it's common. You know I've got experience in the field, and I can tell you that many hookers do indeed have hearts of gold.
A good writer does his homework.
How many of the hookers you worked with had hearts of gold?
I can't speak for all the ones I worked with, but it was pretty regular among the ones I vivisected.