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Anatomy of a bad comic: Redundant narration, empty punchline
Author:
evil_d
Date:
September 15, 2001
Anatomy of a bad comic: Redundant narration, empty punchline
by
evil_d
9-15-01
Jesus and Satan are talking.
Hi, Satan.
Hi, Jesus.
Jesus wants to go to the ball game.
Want to go to the ball game tonight?
Sure.
Jesus remembers he doesn't have any money so Satan has to pay for them both!
I don't have any money!
Dammit!
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