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| I've made the edits that you told me to make! | |
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| Great. Did you find a way to cut 10,000 words? | |
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| Well, about that... I mean, I know I really have a problem with brevity... | |
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| Admitting you have a problem is the first step, they say. | |
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| Heh, yeah. Maybe I need a 12-step program! | |
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| For you, I think it would have to be a 24-step program. | |
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