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| This version of your report is really good. Earlier, it lacked sophistication. | |
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| Thank you sir. I worked really hard to improve it. | |
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| Boss really liked your report. What changes did you make to make it look sophisticated enough? | |
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| I ended every second sentence with "market share and ROI" and replaced product benefits with "customer value proposition". The report wasnt making any sense and hence was sophisticated enough :) | |
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