..Besides, who's gonna point out all my incedious typos for me?

I just read all of your comics, believe it or not. If you distilled down the funny from all 37 of them into about four or five comics, they would be pretty funny comics. So, see if you can concentrate your funny into less comics instead of spreading it out so much.

Makes sense, to an extent. Maybe for now I shot stop the plotting for now...

Which ones we're funny?

I can't remember any specific funny. I just recall a general air of funny that seemed to waft through several of the panels here and there.

I would try not to narrate too much -- captions tend to screw up the flow of the comic -- and try to coalesce the air of funny into more concentrated clods of funny. That way you -- hey, wait a minute. To an "extent"? What the FUCK? To an EXTENT????

I only read the latest comic. DOn't try to tell a story, try to be funny. Try to make the reader laugh before the second or third frame.

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I only read the latest comic. DOn't try to tell a story, try to be funny. Try to make the reader laugh before the second or third frame.

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Maybe this is better, eh?

Looks sort of like my Aunt Elka and Rush Limbaugh in their younger years.

lol

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Looks sort of like my Aunt Elka and Rush Limbaugh in their younger years.

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