this is my first comic so it probably sucks.

It wasn't funny, but it was a good warning to people that they should be careful, and not end up like the character who was careless.

its a good first comic, compared to most others when theyre newbs. I also like the name, that was a good AFI record.

thanks, yeah allhallows was a good album by afi, aus rotten is a good band too.