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deustchman
December 30, 2004 2:42 PM

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biped
December 30, 2004 2:57 PM

I think your comics will get a lot better when you begin to have actual ideas for them.

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Jorgen
December 30, 2004 3:01 PM

That was mean.

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biped
December 30, 2004 3:22 PM

quote:
That was mean.

It was intended to be constructive, only in a slightly snide manner.

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not_Scyess
December 30, 2004 4:24 PM

quote:
My First Day At Stripcreator
Hopefully also your last.

Yes, that was mean.

At least I get your comics, which is more than I can say for most new people. But screaming the obvious ("YOU'RE BALD!" to a bald man) or nonsense ("THANK YOU, SENATOR!") doesn't make for funny. It's just kind of boring.

Still, I wonder if you're not just an oldie in disguise ("SCROE!").

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fzh
January 2, 2005 11:28 PM

no offence, but those comics suck big donkey balls.

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andydougan
January 3, 2005 11:34 AM

I smiled very slightly at "EPILEPSY, MY DEAR WATSON!" But only because I remembered a joke from earlier.

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MikeyG
January 3, 2005 11:55 AM

There was mild amusement in my face when reading these comics, but I think they had more to do with the bamboo shoot in my asshole than your comics.

Anyway, I get your comics, but they need a lot of work. Maybe some punchlines. One of the things you do that so many other newbies do is make a set of three comics or so, and one of them is just a lame continuation or set-up for another one.

You may want to try making each comic stand out on its own somehow. Maybe making them funny would help.

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JESUSSANDWICH
January 3, 2005 1:59 PM

I shit your pants

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Inflatable_Man
January 3, 2005 5:12 PM

*nods, smiles and backs away slowly*

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biped
January 3, 2005 9:05 PM

*accidentally becomes Pope*

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User #16352
January 4, 2005 1:17 PM

I hate when that happens!

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