Ok, here is my comic.
Tell me how you like my comic. Sorry i made a little typos in my comic.

The wording is kind of rough and hard to follow, but aside from the crudeness I'd say these are pretty funny comics at heart.

Do note that any of those comics would've been funnier without the narration boxes.

Ok, but I dont find it confusing.

Oh an here is my new comic

Ok, here is the new life in hell comic.

You're rather going downhill, I think... unless there's something I'm just missing.

Different people have different tastes.

Here is a comic (i think) is funny soon if everyone likes the trailor i will make the actual comic.

They pretty much sucked from the get-go. There's hardly any coherence to them, and the lack of coherence isn't even funny. The ones that are coherent are really so run-of-the-mill and patently unfunny.

Ya, but how does that help my comics. just saying my comics suck doesnt help me.

I know that, but you don't seem to take criticism well.

A real punchline once in a while would be good. Lose the unnecessary narration, of course, and add some coherence.

Yes, but in yer last post you were just saying I sucked. So, give me advise for now on. Anyway, I am not the best comic. Just started Oh and here are some new ones. DnD jokes.

I hope this one is funnier.

I like dthe VERY first one about the Replublicans and the latest one. But the others...meh...they suck.

Most of your comics are funny, a few are confusing but otha then that I like them!

Thank you everyone now here are some new ones that may suck.

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Credit to you for keeping on coming back after everyone says your comics suck. Which they do.

No, actually, I did like the second one from the top, in a Beavis and Butthead kind of way.

Seriously though, spend a bit of time on punctuation and things will make much more sense. At least put in a comma where there would be a slight pause in the speech.

Tony

You DO have persistence, and I DID think that "little sisters" was funny, but before you post something, try getting a friend to read it and see what they think before making yourself look like an idiot. Just take the critisizm in stride and try a little harder.

Ok, here is a don't smoke 1. If you smoke this may be offensive.

Ok, I think this one is pretty funny.

It's alright stuff, I hate crisitsm but it's better than saying you suck, so i'll just say think a bit before you make a comic....make sure it makes you laugh at least three tiems in a row when you read it....not that i do this