I got this idea from someone elses comic so I came up with this. Any good?
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The comic is very cohesive, has good grammar and spelling, and a coherent transition from frame to frame. It isn't random (except for your choice of character sprites), and the characters fit their roles well. It has everything a good comic has. Except funniness, it just wasn't funny. Everything else about it was good though, so get some funny and you'll be all set.

I agree. There should be a fourth panel with an actual joke in it. Then it'd be hilarous.

I thought the cowboy thinking "Shit!" was the punchline.

Yeah, shit seemed like the punchline. Not bad!

If its not Scottish its CRAP!

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If its not Scottish its CRAP!

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I'm not horribly impressed, but someone's been doing his homework and can actually write a comic without sinking to poor grammar/spelling or injokes from other sites. Way to go!

Now just funny it up a bit and you're ready to roll.

Oh, pottedmeat? Go drink a bottle of scotch and drown in the atlantic. We have enough scots here, we don't need arrogant, unfunny ones with no comics too.