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trogo
July 14, 2005 7:00 PM

what can be said exept that im insane and unfunny:




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hughlloyd
July 14, 2005 7:39 PM

They're not BAD, anyway. :)

I probably like the dino comics one best, except I felt the narration carried on too long in the last panel... ending it at "they all went homo" would make it better overall, I feel. :o

Marveling at the glory of poo seems like something I would do, so that one might be bad. ;) Funny, though.

My favorite line: "Mexicans, hah hah... I don't get it" Great! :D

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mandingo
July 14, 2005 11:45 PM

quote:
I probably like the dino comics one best
me too

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Boritom
July 15, 2005 12:41 AM

The Dino one is definitely the best, but you show promise throughout!

Then again... so did I at one time...

*sigh*

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DragonXero
July 15, 2005 12:45 AM

Not bad a'tall. Keep it up and maybe make sure you don't get so wordy in the first panel, then you're good to go. I personally feel that more than one sentence per character in the first panel is a recipie for unhilarity.

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theReverend
July 15, 2005 1:28 PM

I would read this comic if if were in a newspaper, and enjoy it. I would not, however, buy a newspaper for the sole purpose of reading it. Also, I probably won't seek out your comics on this site, but if I do run across one I'll probably like it.

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biped
July 15, 2005 2:38 PM

I would enjoy these comics if I clicked on this thread and read them.

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Splunge
July 15, 2005 9:26 PM

Is it just me? When people title their threads in "Read My Damn Comics" in a self depricating way like "these suck" or "my fucking god my comics are so bad", I don't even want to look at the damn comics. If you think they are so bad, then why post them at all? Do you think the title of the thread will stop people from seeing if they really are bad? Or that the title will stop people from telling you that they are bad? I think that you actually think that they are really good, but you are being passive-aggressive. You know, being confrontational in a reverse-psychological way. "You can't hurt me I already hurt myself."

If you like your stuff enough to post them for feedback than at least have the balls to own up to them. Or name the thread in a neutral way. "I'm new here, these are my first comics", "What do you think of these?" See?

Believe me, if people think they suck, they will tell you.

On that note, the last two were okay. I liked the dino one. A bit too verbose in the last narration. Keep working. Not that I would know. My stuff all sucks real bad.

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biped
July 15, 2005 9:46 PM

Is this better?

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Splunge
July 15, 2005 9:55 PM

There ya go.

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OmniMarconi67
July 15, 2005 10:39 PM

I think it's a consensus that you're doing alright. Like everyone's saying, just work on the verbosness a touch and you'll be just fine. Of course I'm no one to talk when it comes to verbosness...

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mandingo
July 15, 2005 10:43 PM

quote:
Is it just me? When people title their threads in "Read My Damn Comics" in a self depricating way like "these suck" or "my fucking god my comics are so bad", I don't even want to look at the damn comics. If you think they are so bad, then why post them at all? Do you think the title of the thread will stop people from seeing if they really are bad? Or that the title will stop people from telling you that they are bad? I think that you actually think that they are really good, but you are being passive-aggressive."
i dont think its that shit at all. i think its that alot of people are nervous when putting themself out there to a new group. i'm fine with reading their stuff. its the ones that ask for opinions and then bitch the first time they get a bad review that i don't even bother with

but i do plan on taking your advice just as an excuse to name all my future Read My Damn Comics threads "look upon these works, ye mighty, and despair"

quote:
Of course I'm no one to talk when it comes to verbosness...
if i think about that sentence for too long my head will explode

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HCRoyall
July 16, 2005 12:21 AM

In my opinion, the people who post under self-depreciating titles are the funnier ones. You're okay, you just try and put too many words in your comic, Like Omni said. Keep working on it and you'll improve.

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