check out my first 2 new comics

There's promise in these comics. They aren't great, but they aren't terrible and they do have a few grains of funny in them.

Keep churning out comics, don't try so hard to make them funny because it makes them feel forced, and over all take criticism well and weigh it carefully. We're blunt and not very tactful for the most part, but we're not above helping you get better if you're polite about it.

If you have trouble getting "the funny", the best advice we can give is to study other people's work (especially those with Top Rated comics) and see how they work their mojo.

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There's promise in these comics. They aren't great, but they aren't terrible and they do have a few grains of funny in them.

Keep churning out comics, don't try so hard to make them funny because it makes them feel forced, and over all take criticism well and weigh it carefully. We're blunt and not very tactful for the most part, but we're not above helping you get better if you're polite about it.

If you have trouble getting "the funny", the best advice we can give is to study other people's work (especially those with Top Rated comics) and see how they work their mojo.

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New one:

heh

Stop putting my sigs in your posts.

i actually kind of like them I think whoever it was up there is right about seeing other peoples comics check out some of mine and i will be completely fine with you using my material as inspiration or whatever as long as you give me credit... (also a piece of advice) RANDOMNESS IS AWESOME!!!!!!

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Stop putting my sigs in your posts.

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Those narration boxes must be used VERY CAREFULLY. Repeating the title in them is not an example of this concept.

Other than that and the punctuation, pretty okay.

I defintely don't want to pour hot wax in my eyeballs and peehole, as I do after reading bad comics.

^(cry for help)

Also, nice use of Abe and "The Innards Twins" as I'd like everyone to call them now.

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Stop putting my sigs in your posts.

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sorry thats just a mess up i didnt really add your sig in there lol

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Wo-oh oh-oh-oh!
Wo-oh oh-oh!
Wo-oh oh-oh-oh!
The right stuff...

I was hoping your comics would be good enough to use that gag when I saw the topic.

They are.

You may live.

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Those narration boxes must be used VERY CAREFULLY. Repeating the title in them is not an example of this concept.

Other than that and the punctuation, pretty okay.

I defintely don't want to pour hot wax in my eyeballs and peehole, as I do after reading bad comics.

^(cry for help)

Also, nice use of Abe and "The Innards Twins" as I'd like everyone to call them now.

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I like what you have done so far.

Keep it up. I look forward to seeing more.

I'm a new stripper too. :D

Countess

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I like what you have done so far.

Keep it up. I look forward to seeing more.

I'm a new stripper too. :D

Countess

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New one to all the Zelda Fans you'll get it :P:

haha

Ho ho! "Double-u tee ef" indeed!

messed up on this one the first time with some spelling mistakes but i fixed it:

Okay, the Zelda one got me chuckling, but the others are lacking.

And just FYI, to post comic you just have to copy and paste the comic url. All the html is unnecessary; that's why that "border=0> crap keeps popping up.

You sure like that fire prop.

/comics/Syon/326816/ Thanks for the advice and yeah i was kinda on a pyro streak there for awhile lol

Welcome to SC, keep up the tries. Do or do not, there is not try.

/comics/Syon/327274/

/comics/Syon/327400/

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/comics/Syon/327400/

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/comics/Syon/327786/

*sigh*

You are on the road to Funnyville, Arizona. Please drive carefully.

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You are on the road to Funnyville, Arizona. Please drive carefully.

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/comics/Syon/327983/

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/Syon

oops lol i cant get the link to my other one

/comics/Syon/327987/ there

i do not gett the lasy one

i dont either lol

/comics/Syon/328060/

LOL,holy crpa i like that one thats SO gunny

/comics/Syon/328164/