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Jarhead
May 6, 2006 8:00 AM

/comics/Jarhead/346890/
/comics/Jarhead/346962/
/comics/Jarhead/347010/
/comics/Jarhead/347012/

They were all supposed to be 2-panel comix but terrorists ruined it with their mind-control...
Can you pretty-please-with-sugar-and-boobies-on-top fix it,pleasy??
Thanx^_^

(Srry if im wasting your time..)

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crabby
May 6, 2006 8:19 AM

Almost all of those are funnier as 3 panel comics.

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Injokester
May 6, 2006 10:50 AM

I'm with crabby on this one, except the first one would be funniest with the non-smiling version of the blonde woman in the third panel.

They'd also be a lot better without the ..'s, ...'s, double punctuation and *sigh*. Take those out and you've got some good stuff there.

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crabby
May 6, 2006 11:03 AM

I thought it was funnier that she was smiling in the third panel because it made you draw your own conclusions rather than just setting it all up. It was very original and very well done.

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Brad
May 6, 2006 6:26 PM

Jarhead, is this problem happening reliably for you? What browser/OS are you using?

I'll fix those comics for you.

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Brad
May 6, 2006 6:31 PM

Fixed. I'd really like to track this problem down and kill it. If anyone can reproduce the bug reliably, send me an email or something.

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crabby
May 6, 2006 10:24 PM

All those comics are now alot less funny.

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Jarhead
May 7, 2006 9:04 AM

quote:
Almost all of those are funnier as 3 panel comics.


I dont see how...I figured they'll look like nOObish crap because whats funny with the midget looking back at the girl smiling after looking at his crab...oh.

quote:
I'm with crabby on this one, except the first one would be funniest with the non-smiling version of the blonde woman in the third panel.

They'd also be a lot better without the ..'s, ...'s, double punctuation and *sigh*. Take those out and you've got some good stuff there.



I would usualy maybe agree with Crabby(because hes bigger than me) but I do see how you guys liked the first one I guess..
Whats less funny with 's and th *Sigh*.
I love my little *Sigh*'s...I'll stop using *Sigh*s when you pull them from cold dead fingers...

quote:
I thought it was funnier that she was smiling in the third panel because it made you draw your own conclusions rather than just setting it all up. It was very original and very well done.
You bastard. I do find it ironic im only original and very well done when it accidently happens...
You guys are messing with my head...because now you guys are starting to make me regret asking Brad change them..I'm not playing your game, I know the rules of checkers and I will check-mate your ass...

quote:
Jarhead, is this problem happening reliably for you? What browser/OS are you using?

I'll fix those comics for you.
Fixed. I'd really like to track this problem down and kill it. If anyone can reproduce the bug reliably, send me an email or something.


Thanks Brad. I have um i think a microsoft...computer.
I have a box that shines pretty lights at me..I dunno what it is and I'm pretty sure I'll get that damn bug alot more in the future(Creating more better and well-made comics) but sadly cant reproduce it.
I dont wnat the bug gone no more, It can be like Stripcreator's mascot and pet.
Darb the Three-Paneling Insect!

quote:
All those comics are now alot less funny.
Are you serious?
Are you fuckin' serious??
If i posted those in "Read my Damn comics" I'll be one fuckin' star now...
There is no possible way those damn things were funny with a thitd panel that looks like it was hooped-up on LSD and crack.
Its still Way funnier than Family Circus but hell, Rapists are funnier than Family Circus!
Sorry but sometimes I dont get whats supposed to be funny here.. I think...i dunno what I think..
I'm gonnna go drink this all away like am American.

Thanks again Brad. You rule and a God.
And please Brad do not respond..
"Of course it [bold]Was[/bold] funnier with 3-panels.."

-Jarhead(AKA Baddest mothafucka in the valley)

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crabby
May 7, 2006 10:07 AM

Yeah, they were all funnier as three panel comics. Now they are just two panel comics with weak, overdone jokes. Not awful, but not good either.

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Injokester
May 7, 2006 10:17 AM

The first one was funnier with three panels because it could either mean the dwarf turned back in the hope that things might be different after he had the conversation with the crab, or he could be doing it in a "What? This is normal" sort of way.

It would be better without the sigh because then the reader could either interpret it as a dwarf who's friends with an intelligent crab, or it could be that he's just crazy and talks to his pet.

Let the reader use their imagination as much as possible, and try to leave some room for alternate interpretations. Generally people will read it in the way that's funniest for them. For me the joke that the crabs he had weren't the STD but actual crabs wasn't funny at all, but the idea of a crazy midget taking his pet crab out to pick up women is comedic gold.

Also if you'd left out the sigh and ended every sentence with a full stop only, then it could also be read that in the second panel the dwarf is saying a deep and meaningful goodbye to his friend (who is really just a crab and has no idea what the hell if going on), before ditching him for the blonde (by turning back in the third panel). I find that idea pretty amusing as well.

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crabby
May 7, 2006 10:43 AM

Well put Injokester.

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Injokester
May 7, 2006 10:53 AM

Of course, you could milk it instead.

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/Injokester/sets/Crabs/

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Jarhead
May 7, 2006 6:03 PM

Yeah.
Damnit now I wnat the third panel back...
I guess I need to donate...
30 grand enouph?

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Hari_Nezumi
May 11, 2006 6:58 PM

...
Ooooooooooooh! 30 grand! I get it! You used an extremely large amount of money in causal conversation! Like you're rich and have that kind of money to give away!!!

LOL

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crabby
May 11, 2006 7:07 PM

I thought it was sarcasm.

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biped
May 12, 2006 8:45 AM

"I like a good crab joke."

-- Andy Griffith

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DragonXero
May 19, 2006 6:30 PM

"Whitey's been keepin' me down."
- Andy Griffith

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