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Sonja
July 19, 2006 8:15 PM

This is a new series I'm working on.. I really would appreciate some feedback or something so umm, hit me up I guess? Any feedback is good feedback, even if its negative.
Thanks guys!

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/Sonja

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Sonja
July 19, 2006 8:32 PM

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crabby
July 19, 2006 8:45 PM

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Sonja
July 19, 2006 11:08 PM

Sorry, what?

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BigFrank105
July 19, 2006 11:21 PM

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Sorry, what?

honestly, stfu

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Sonja
July 19, 2006 11:54 PM

haaaaahahahaha

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User #52448
July 20, 2006 4:12 AM

i liked it, but my opinion means fuck all, because im a cunt.

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not_Scyess
July 20, 2006 6:50 AM

Would it kill you to spell out "shut the fuck up?" How would someone even pronounce "stfu"? It looks dumb coming out of people's mouths.

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biped
July 20, 2006 7:58 AM

They are pretty good comics.

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Sonja
July 20, 2006 9:23 AM

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Would it kill you to spell out "shut the fuck up?" How would someone even pronounce "stfu"? It looks dumb coming out of people's mouths.

Hmm, no, I don't suppose it would kill me to spell out "shut the fuck up".. but I think this is just faster and more people can relate to the humor of it since its the internet and people don't usually spell out whole words. Trust me, I usually think people are stupid when they do that, but this kind of goes into play with my comic. It makes it seem like Mark is dismissing Marbie or Gabby or whoever it is he's talking to, faster when he says "stfu" instead of "shut the fuck up". But thanks for the input! (and I'm pretty sure it'd be pronounced ST-FOO if you had to pronounce it). Also, thank you biped, and mattmallanone (even though I don't understand what your comment meant? It pretty much contradicts itself.).

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crabby
July 20, 2006 10:24 AM

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Would it kill you to spell out "shut the fuck up?" How would someone even pronounce "stfu"? It looks dumb coming out of people's mouths.

Hmm, no, I don't suppose it would kill me to spell out "shut the fuck up".. but I think this is just faster and more people can relate to the humor of it since its the internet and people don't usually spell out whole words. Trust me, I usually think people are stupid when they do that, but this kind of goes into play with my comic. It makes it seem like Mark is dismissing Marbie or Gabby or whoever it is he's talking to, faster when he says "stfu" instead of "shut the fuck up". But thanks for the input! (and I'm pretty sure it'd be pronounced ST-FOO if you had to pronounce it). Also, thank you biped, and mattmallanone (even though I don't understand what your comment meant? It pretty much contradicts itself.).


Could you abbreviate all that? Otherwise I can't relate to what you're trying to say.

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Sonja
July 20, 2006 10:49 AM

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Would it kill you to spell out "shut the fuck up?" How would someone even pronounce "stfu"? It looks dumb coming out of people's mouths.

Hmm, no, I don't suppose it would kill me to spell out "shut the fuck up".. but I think this is just faster and more people can relate to the humor of it since its the internet and people don't usually spell out whole words. Trust me, I usually think people are stupid when they do that, but this kind of goes into play with my comic. It makes it seem like Mark is dismissing Marbie or Gabby or whoever it is he's talking to, faster when he says "stfu" instead of "shut the fuck up". But thanks for the input! (and I'm pretty sure it'd be pronounced ST-FOO if you had to pronounce it). Also, thank you biped, and mattmallanone (even though I don't understand what your comment meant? It pretty much contradicts itself.).


Could you abbreviate all that? Otherwise I can't relate to what you're trying to say.

No.

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crabby
July 20, 2006 10:50 AM

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Would it kill you to spell out "shut the fuck up?" How would someone even pronounce "stfu"? It looks dumb coming out of people's mouths.

Hmm, no, I don't suppose it would kill me to spell out "shut the fuck up".. but I think this is just faster and more people can relate to the humor of it since its the internet and people don't usually spell out whole words. Trust me, I usually think people are stupid when they do that, but this kind of goes into play with my comic. It makes it seem like Mark is dismissing Marbie or Gabby or whoever it is he's talking to, faster when he says "stfu" instead of "shut the fuck up". But thanks for the input! (and I'm pretty sure it'd be pronounced ST-FOO if you had to pronounce it). Also, thank you biped, and mattmallanone (even though I don't understand what your comment meant? It pretty much contradicts itself.).


Could you abbreviate all that? Otherwise I can't relate to what you're trying to say.

No.
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AngryAmerican
July 20, 2006 11:57 AM

it didn't make me want to kill you. but the entire joke coulda been done in one 3 panel comic. ya know?

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Sonja
July 20, 2006 12:41 PM

Yes, I know.
I thought a series would be more interesting for me to write though, and also create a kind of "looking forward to the next part" thing.

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AngryAmerican
July 20, 2006 1:32 PM

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boorite
July 20, 2006 5:16 PM

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Would it kill you to spell out "shut the fuck up?"

Shut the fuck up.

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Sonja
July 20, 2006 9:34 PM

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Would it kill you to spell out "shut the fuck up?"

Shut the fuck up.

Haha, thanks for that.

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BigFrank105
July 20, 2006 10:15 PM

stfu

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LuckyGuess
July 21, 2006 12:18 AM

I like these.

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mandingo
July 21, 2006 12:21 AM

i liked them. stfu is funnier then 'shut the fuck up' the same way 'ba bye' is funnier than 'goodbye' and 'shhh' is funnier than 'shutup and get out of my room or i'm going to tell mom what you've been doing to me all these years, you monster!'

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Sonja
July 21, 2006 6:47 AM

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I like these.

thanks.

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i liked them. stfu is funnier then 'shut the fuck up' the same way 'ba bye' is funnier than 'goodbye' and 'shhh' is funnier than 'shutup and get out of my room or i'm going to tell mom what you've been doing to me all these years, you monster!'

thanks. and I agree.

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not_Scyess
July 21, 2006 10:04 AM

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Would it kill you to spell out "shut the fuck up?" How would someone even pronounce "stfu"? It looks dumb coming out of people's mouths.

Hmm, no, I don't suppose it would kill me to spell out "shut the fuck up".. but I think this is just faster and more people can relate to the humor of it since its the internet and people don't usually spell out whole words. Trust me, I usually think people are stupid when they do that, but this kind of goes into play with my comic. It makes it seem like Mark is dismissing Marbie or Gabby or whoever it is he's talking to, faster when he says "stfu" instead of "shut the fuck up". But thanks for the input! (and I'm pretty sure it'd be pronounced ST-FOO if you had to pronounce it). Also, thank you biped, and mattmallanone (even though I don't understand what your comment meant? It pretty much contradicts itself.).



I neglected to mention this, but I did actually like most of the comics. Good stuff, overall.

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not_Scyess
July 21, 2006 10:08 AM

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I like these.

thanks.

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i liked them. stfu is funnier then 'shut the fuck up' the same way 'ba bye' is funnier than 'goodbye' and 'shhh' is funnier than 'shutup and get out of my room or i'm going to tell mom what you've been doing to me all these years, you monster!'

thanks. and I agree.

What a load of ox tails. Catchphrases are neck and neck with profanity as the lowest form of humor. They're too easy and get old long before people stop using them. Normally when I see stuff like that I think, "Is that the best they could come up with?"

I do, however, appreicate a good running gag, which is why these comics worked as a series even though you could technically have done it in one.

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boorite
July 21, 2006 1:40 PM

I spelled out "shut the fuck up" and it didn't kill me.

btw stfu lol loser

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