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Matt_wolfe
December 24, 2006 2:55 PM

I made 2 new comics with 2 new backgrounds.


/comics/Matt_wolfe/378157/
/comics/Matt_wolfe/378163/

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not_Scyess
December 24, 2006 3:48 PM

The first one is a little confusing.  I'm still not sure why "examining" is in quotes.  If it's a necrophilia thing, that needs to be slightly more explicit and have more of a punch.

The second one definitely needs more punch.  The joke is too obvious... you need to throw in something else to make it original enough to be funny.

Keep trying, though.

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Humpenstein
December 24, 2006 6:30 PM

I thought the second comic was titled "Sexual Nintendo", this made me laugh, unfortunately that was the only thing that made me laugh.

I encourage you to write funny comics from now on.

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AngryAmerican
December 24, 2006 9:24 PM

there may be no hope for you, but don't let that discourage you.

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biped
December 24, 2006 11:55 PM

In the clock one, the girl could have said:

1.  "I can't--I have a yeast infection."

2.  "Where the hell do you put the rubber?"

3.  "I'm telling Mom about you and Uncle Bob."

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