Forum archives » Read My Damn Comics » YAY!!! My first comic!!

fleury29
May 29, 2008 9:34 AM

Please check out my first comic and tell me if it sucked.

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/fleury29 

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AngryAmerican
May 29, 2008 11:00 AM

i don't understand the pink sweater one at all, and could only get through one of the pot smoking squirrel ones.

 swing and a miss, but keep trying...

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fleury29
May 29, 2008 6:40 PM

 

/comics/fleury29/433391/ 

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fleury29
May 29, 2008 6:49 PM

If you want to leave a reply, leave in my inbox.  If not able, leave it here.

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User #85733
May 31, 2008 12:24 AM

Regarding "SNL Sucks,"

his name is spelled "Will Ferrell."  You should be consistent

about ending your sentences in your dialogue with punctuation.

The names of the television shows should have double quotes

around them.  It would be capitalized as "Thank God" instead

of the generic "god" as you have it.  Place a comma right before

"you moron," because that entity is being addressed. 

I like it overall; it's visually interesting to me, it is relevant to me, and I feel I understand about 85% - 90% of its content. 

 

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