/comics/CalifornyaRIP/433395/

The nerd sex is awesome. I lol'd.

excellent stuff man

/comics/seanator/433531/

great stuff. I just joined, check out my stuff too, I'm that post sitting atop yours.

CalifornyaRIP,

in your strip called "Awkward," you have the error of "throw"

instead of the needed "thrown" in the first panel.  Also, you

have the error of a word that does not exist, which is

"sweeped," instead of the needed "swept" in the third panel.  These

 detract from an otherwise enjoyable (and particularly) cute comic

(at least for me).  I can in no way attribute the language choice to

the characters in the strip.  Please consider doing it over.

Thanks story_teller, I can't edit stuff yet because Brad takes forever to contact donaters about becoming members, but I'm not exactly an english major and I make mistakes once in a while

Anyway, I'll get on that as soon as it's physically possible.

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story_teller wrote:

CalifornyaRIP,

in your strip called "Awkward," you have the error of "throw"

instead of the needed "thrown" in the first panel. Also, you

have the error of a word that does not exist, which is

"sweeped," instead of the needed "swept" in the third panel. These

detract from an otherwise enjoyable (and particularly) cute comic

(at least for me). I can in no way attribute the language choice to

the characters in the strip. Please consider doing it over.

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/comics/CalifornyaRIP/433681/

Past my total laziness I made a new comic, if you can call it that. It's more like a really offensive soundbyte.

I thought it was funny, anyway.

Bully for you!

/comics/CalifornyaRIP/433755/

/comics/CalifornyaRIP/433987/

/comics/CalifornyaRIP/434070/