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User #85733
June 21, 2008 10:47 PM

 Adult content -- but no cursing

 

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/story_teller

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crabby
June 21, 2008 11:07 PM

Needs more cursing.

 

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choadwarrior
June 21, 2008 11:15 PM

I think there should be a comma between semen-filled and glow-in-the-dark. It distracted me from enjoying this comic.

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User #86756
June 22, 2008 4:13 PM

You're being childish and stupid, choadwarrior.

My points are true and constructive.

Get off of this thread. 

 

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not_Scyess
June 22, 2008 8:35 PM

While the sentence "My points are true and constructive," is gramatically correct (going by parts of speech), it's awkward to read because "a point" (in the sense of the essential theme of a speech, as opposed to a tapering extremity) is not usually modified by the word "true" in the sense of "holding veracity" (as opposed to "actual.")

Were you to use that particular lexcon in another example (e.g. "I found his true points to be constructive.") you will note that "true" begins to take on the meaning of "actual," rather than "valid," which is no doubt what you meant to convey in your sentence above.

You should be more careful in your word choices in the future to make sure the true point of what you are trying to convey shows through in you criticism, which is not only constructive but also much admired both on this site and throughout the intellectual community of the Internet.

Thank you.

 

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choadwarrior
June 22, 2008 9:17 PM

So is your name story_teelevener now, or is it story_teoneoneer? I don't know how to properly address you since numbers and letters don't belong together in standard English words.

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not_Scyess
June 23, 2008 11:03 AM

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UnknownEric
June 23, 2008 11:10 AM

I've clearly been missing some fun shit over in RMDC, eh?

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