Forum archives » Read My Damn Comics » Hi, rate my first comic please.

MSComicstrip
September 23, 2008 1:45 AM

I am new to this site and comic writing so i started off simple. please rate and tell me what you think.

/comics/MSComicstrip/441894/

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lima
September 23, 2008 7:30 AM

Its not intrinsically bad, so I've rated it as 'okay', but the nail-in-the-head-guy-putting-a-nail-in-his-head-in-the-final-panel-thing is the most over-used joke on the entire site, and so most people on here won't find it funny. Look at most users and their first comics almost always use the nail-in-the-head-guy.

It doesn't mean you're not funny though. Make more comics.

Oh, and welcome to stripcreator.

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FinnNYC
September 23, 2008 11:52 AM

I, for one, applaud your use of the nail in the head guy in your first comic. You're carrying on a fine SC tradition assuring our children's children will proudly select nail in the head guy when they are ready to make their first strips. You are a true patriot.

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fashinsta11
September 23, 2008 5:36 PM

I like it :)

 Simple but creative, imaginative but not to over the top. I'd also like to welcome to to Strip Creator :) I'm also one of the newbies -- don't worry there are 100's of us perking around every corner :)

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bike
September 23, 2008 6:02 PM

Welcome MS,

While the nail-in-head guy is a little obvious, I applaud your minimalist tendencies.  The typical n00b mistake is to cram too much stuff in, so I really encourage your straightforward approach of actually crafting a joke.  Strip on!    

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User #57622
September 23, 2008 7:04 PM

I am also glad that you didnt fill each narration box with something not needed.

cant wait until the 10th, when youll probably hit your stride and have your own style.

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MSComicstrip
September 25, 2008 9:36 PM

Number 2.

/comics/MSComicstrip/442167/

Might be a hit, miss kinda of joke.

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MSComicstrip
September 26, 2008 12:59 AM

Another one i did because i was bored.

/comics/MSComicstrip/442178/

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Beeko180
September 26, 2008 10:01 PM

For A Newbie who's only made 3 comics. Your quite good. I bet by the time you've made around about 6 or 10 you'll have your first hit. Keep it up.

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Ogyaf
September 26, 2008 11:32 PM

I like Hypocrite.  I gave it a "Good" rating.

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