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tomko
March 4, 2009 12:12 PM

here is a movie reviews comic i put to show my thinking on movie I watched in passed weeks. i did not give away plot details you can read these review and see if you want to watch the movie from them but mainly i want to show my opinuion not help you no want to watch

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tomko
March 4, 2009 12:14 PM

i forgot to put in comic

/comics/tomko/456289/

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evil_d
March 4, 2009 1:02 PM

1.  Your writing is difficult to follow.  If English isn't your first language, don't be afraid to write in your first language.  If you do write in English, pay more attention to things like spelling, word order, and whether your text is getting cut off.

2.  There's no need to jam as much as possible into a single comic.  Why not do one comic per movie and give your observations more space?

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