could i get some feedback on that comic please ?

link is below :

http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?author=sub_m7&ID=82372

It's shit. If I was you I'd give up. You're never going to amount to anything. Go and take up fishing or something.

Gosh, I hate to say anything negative. So I'll just say, terrific post, Kramer!

An auditor representing Clarkwork Logistics has returned from the field, and his evaluation of your comic is not encouraging. Here is a summary of his findings.

s = Sodomy Content (kg): 8
F = Force Exerted by Punchline (kg/sq.meter): 2
t = Set-up Time (seconds): 6

Assessed Comic Value (V) = 100*F(1/t)(1+s(0.01))

The audit concludes,
"The Comic Value of the client's strip has been assessed at 36. This compares with an average comic value approaching 100 and a theoretical maximum exceeding 300 (where s approaches 10, F approaches 10, and s is about 3 seconds)."

The auditor also notes that the posting of your request for comic evaluation to the General Discussion forum is a violation of ISO 9002 comic standards. For the usual fee, he is willing to withhold this item from his final report.

Or you could just bend over and take it up the ass from Tobor like most of the moron newbies.

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(where s approaches 10, F approaches 10, and s is about 3 seconds).

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This idea of "secret illegal gay spots" fascinates me. Maybe I'm standing on one right now! How would I know? If I stand here long enough, will I become gay? What if I walk over one on the way to lunch? Suppose a gay man sees me walking over it, and interprets it as a solicitation? Oh my!

First of all, wrong thread, arsehole!
Second, it's spelt "tight", arsehole!
Thirdly, "i" should be "I", arsehole!
Fourthly, Dr. Pedantic must be rolling in his grave, arsehole!
Fifthly, you can post comics in a thread without linking them, arsehole!
Lastly, you're an arsehole, arsehole!

Bazilla thinks sub_m7 is an arsehole.

I think kramer was knocked off his tricycle by a newbie when he was wee.

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This idea of "secret illegal gay spots" fascinates me.

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I meant in Kajun's pants, because he has homosexual sex with homosexual men.

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I meant in Kajun's pants, because he has homosexual sex with homosexual men.

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I meant in Kajun's pants, because he has homosexual sex with homosexual men.

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You're an inspiration to us all, Smarmulus...

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cuntingly faggoty

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They're faggotly delicious!

Any sex I might have had with Boorite in the past was purely heterosexual.

Uh oh. Please tell me boorite hasn't replaced me as the subject of your single entendres!

You feeling threatened, Andy?

And Smarmulus, I give credit where credit's due. Sub_M7 asked for an opinion on his strip, and I gave one. He's been hanging around here for months now, begging us to visit his godawful website and join his mysterious gang.

You seem to think I have this low tolerance for newbies. I don't. Everyone was a newbie once, that in itself is no reason to give them abuse. Compared to some people on this site, I am positively restrained.

I'm just sick of Sub_M7 and his lame attempts to draw attention to himself.

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Uh oh. Please tell me boorite hasn't replaced me as the subject of your single entendres!

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I agree.

sub_m7 saw that we had a community here and just dumped spam into the forums. Seriously, that's all it was. He was not part of the group. he had made no comics, had never participated in the forums. he just turned up and said "Look at my site", as if Brad owed him the right to use the community he has built up for free advertising.

Basically, he's an annoying and insistent git who won't stop crapping on about his own crappy site. He isn't worth defending.

My response is to weigh this thread down with crappy posts like this one.

ok.

first of all,
this comic is not anti-gay , if any of you nerdy comic freaks should have interpretated it that way

second
bazilla has some serious mental problems, but all of you and especially he and his psychiatrist should know about that anyway

third
the name of the thread is -dropping standards- for fuck's sake. this DOES actually represent my opinion, which is that i wasnt too happy with that comic.

forth
bazilla again (fuck him anyway, "comic overlord", huh)
if there schould be a spelling mistake, it DOESNT REALLY MATTER, if people whose IQ is above 25 can understand it (and you apperently did, so...)

fifth
the thing about that secret, illegal gay spot is probably the only good aspect of the whole comic

sixth
about spamming. we flooded the damn net with spam, so it wasnt only your miserable site...
but yours was one of the few we found worthy to pay a visit to every now and then, so DO fell honoured

seventh
concerning this newbie thing....
are we 6-12 and still at school, where the bigger kids terrify the small ones, OR WHAT THE FUCK ???? (!!!!!)
i dont mind giving respect to people who have been around longer, but i wont take crap just cause i am new to that site

eighth
FUCK ALL OF YOU WHO CRITIZISED MY COMIC APPART FROM BOORITE AND KRAMER_VS_KRAMER;

so long, N6 (sub_m7)

ps: we gonna make a party in 2 weeks (14/09/02) and every member from script creator gets free access
e-mail me for more information or visit our site (this is NO SPAM, but an invitation to some non web-based event, which is probably sth 60 - 70 % of you nerds have never been to, so take the chance NOW !!!)

PLUS,

to fucking bastard-bazilla-arselicking-mutherfuck :

i know you can include comics in posts,
HOWEVER, FOR GOD'S SAKE, I PREFER IT THE OTHER WAY

ok ???

I'm not really a homosexual by the way.

Not that there's anything wrong with it.

me neither, but who cares ???

me neither, but who cares ???

I don't.

I don't.

Hahaha, sub_m7 told you all to fuck off except me and kramer!

WEEEEE ARE THE CHAMPIONS....

we sure are !!!!

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ps: we gonna make a party in 2 weeks (14/09/02) and every member from script creator gets free access
e-mail me for more information or visit our site (this is NO SPAM, but an invitation to some non web-based event, which is probably sth 60 - 70 % of you nerds have never been to, so take the chance NOW !!!)

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by the way (again)

the party is going to be in salzburg (austria)

technically, to 'drop standards' ie to lower ones standards, one has to have standards to lower from.

oh, and out of wonderful interest, how many people are coming to this party?

assuming no one froms tripcreator goes that is.

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technically, to 'drop standards' ie to lower ones standards, one has to have standards to lower from.

oh, and out of wonderful interest, how many people are coming to this party?

assuming no one froms tripcreator goes that is.

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I was thinking about it. All I need to do is to figure out how to get to Austria.

ok.

i didn't know that there was a "trip-creator" as well.
how interesting.

i guess there will be 50 - 200 people there, since the entrance is free from 9 - 10, and 5 euro afterwards.

but in salzburg there is the WEF congress from the 15th to the 17th and last year they divided the city into small areas and no one could get through (not even people who lived there !!!)

so, you see, i cant tell yet.

BUT YOU ALL ARE MORE THAN WELCOME.

i will post more info on our site or mail me at mail@bio4ema.tk

Hot dog? You bet! Many score furlongs sold. Mustard for yankee!!

*sigh*

I'm doing jambalaya, spaghetti, and pork medallions St. James and dolby 5.1 DVD all winter. Stop by or don't.

The bunnercave is going to have:

Wall to wall.
A new computer desk.
4 new file cabinets.
Two recliners.
A new sofa.
(It matches the recliners.)
A 32" TV.
Celery 600 256 MEG.
pIII 1.0 GHz, 1.5 GB RAM 100GB HDDx2 rig.
Mood lighting.
Pioneer DTS Dolby 5.1 receiver.
Teac 5.1 surrounds w/ a sub.
Samsung DVD.
Satellite.
A fridge.
Wet bar.
Guest sofa better than the old one.
Central heat. (No blow jobs.)
Hoo hoos.
Doo dads.
Knick knacks.
Decor.
More.

Be there.

love,

bunner

And high speed internet.

Thank you.

BunnerCo.

Located across the street from, but not in, the white ghetto.

"We're a whole bloody lot more fun than any Hyatt Regency." (TM)

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Wet bar.

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My bar is wet.
Anyone wanna wipe it off?

i wont wipe anything from anybody off

seriously...

Bunner, you magnificent bastard!

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And high speed internet.

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talk to my clone[77]

bio4ema

YEEEEHAAAA !!!

i am junior comic technican (whatever thats supposed to be...)

I think someone needs to check the crack level of the water in Austria.

HEY, newbie-girly !!!

no chemical crap, just THC !

(well some LSD, Speed or PCP, BUT NOT OFTEN !!!)

((and ketamin, quilinorm, truxal and voltaren rapid)) ((to be honest, but don't tell me mum, geeza !))

ps.: FUCK SUB_M7 - LONG LIVE BIO4EMA (aka sub_TAF)