I thought they were good, but "a little flat" is a good description for a lot of them. Although this one's dialoge could have been better, it was fairly amusing, and I love your use of perspective:
You're getting better already. I liked your "Stop the MOOing!" series. And I guess I liked the iBox one, although mostly it made me wonder what kind of background I'm missing on this "iBox".
Comic 93004 (Dead Chicken) shows very good use of perspective change. There are plenty of funnier strippers here, but your structure will serve you well. Keep trying.
Thanks guys, glad to know someone's reading and enjoying them. They're really fun to make! Wish we could do more with the characters and things that we can select to be in the comics like move them around or maybe move the balloons above the characters.