Nice one max. Listen up, try not to do more than one comic about the same thing (EX:The Beast finds a friend.) They tend to get old fast, the first one can be good but the second and third one never have the same value. Take it from me, I've mastered the art of failing at 3 parters. If the first one is good the others seem to fail faster.
I just saying let him find a style that works before you jump into a bombardment of jokes. Hes new, since hes new I decided to tell him making a series of of comics is harder than one joke. Just till he finds his style friend, no need to bust out the verbal beating stick.