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Aviatora June 2, 2003 6:52 PM	I saw this site in a New Zealand internet magazine, and I must say that it's great. Please read my strips and ridicule them appropriately... PS: Oh, and I'll be mostly creating strips about Americans and Australains. (Great fodder).
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not_Scyess June 2, 2003 7:02 PM	You're strips aren't very good. I hope that's appropriate. Rookie mistake: too much narration. You'll find your comics are much better without tiresomely overexplaining everything in the narration box. (Well, maybe not your comics, but comics in general.)
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Aviatora June 2, 2003 7:08 PM	Thanks for the feedback not_Scyess. :)
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not_Scyess June 2, 2003 7:14 PM	I live to serve.
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kaufman June 2, 2003 7:45 PM	IT'S A COOKBOOK!
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Aviatora June 2, 2003 7:54 PM	A cookbook???
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Spankling June 2, 2003 8:07 PM	You got a link to this mag article? And as soon as I have your comics translated I'll begin getting sarcastic about them.
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MaxPayne June 2, 2003 8:09 PM	Making your strips with 75%-100% less narration would increase their factor of funny by at least a power of 4.
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Devin
June 3, 2003 12:46 AM

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Rookie mistake: too much narration. You'll find your comics are much better without tiresomely overexplaining everything in the narration box. (Well, maybe not your comics, but comics in general.)

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Making your strips with 75%-100% less narration would increase their factor of funny by at least a power of 4.

You know, Max, now that not_Scyess is back, you don't really have to voice his opinions for him anymore...

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