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antseyJuly 9, 2003 11:56 PM
1st one up for scrutiny
not_ScyessJuly 10, 2003 1:26 AM
Watch over-narrating the comic. Try to let the audience glean what is going on by the action in the comic; having to spell it out is very distracting and often redundant.
I also really enjoyed this one:
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Keep at it.
antseyJuly 10, 2003 7:15 AM
thanks, the other over narrated ones are "in-jokes".
Thanks for the tip!
dcomposedJuly 10, 2003 6:42 PM
The robot one was funny.
Rabid_WeasleJuly 10, 2003 7:50 PM
I especially like how you change the background color to establish that the robots are at a rave. Well done.
But seriously, good comic. :)
antseyJuly 10, 2003 9:09 PM
The robots are at a rave?
Cool!
(i didn't mean that but i'll pretend i did)
FrixFraxOctober 12, 2003 7:54 AM
Keep it up! :)
User #16352October 12, 2003 4:46 PM
Needs more cow bell.
niteowlOctober 12, 2003 4:48 PM
Needs more cow dung.
User #31630October 12, 2003 4:51 PM
Needs more chinks.
User #31630October 12, 2003 4:52 PM
Inside joke sorry. Couldn't resist.
User #16352October 12, 2003 5:25 PM
Inside jokes suck. You suck.
User #31630October 12, 2003 5:31 PM
Boinky - See comment in the CaS thread.
niteowlOctober 12, 2003 5:47 PM
quote:Inside joke sorry. Couldn't resist.I don't get it.
quote:Inside joke sorry. Couldn't resist.
HomOctober 12, 2003 6:04 PM
Antsey, I love you now please make more strips.