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Matchbook_Romance
August 4, 2003 11:20 AM

Hello fellow Stripcreators, if you're looking for a good laugh at someone's somewhat true to life comics, check mines out... LoL... have fun!

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ambulancedriver
August 4, 2003 11:59 AM

... True to life? Anyway, don't use so many narration boxes.

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Matchbook_Romance
August 5, 2003 11:36 AM

Hmmm... thanks for the advice, and maybe... semi-true to life? =D

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User #31630
August 5, 2003 2:26 PM

Well, i did think it was kind of funny how you referred to Hell as Down Under.

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Trippingbillee
August 5, 2003 4:20 PM

Stop with the narration boxes. They tend to make comics stinky. Also, don't end sentences with ellipses...

It makes the comic feel too loose, in my opinion. Punchlines are better with a period at the end.

However, there is some funny stuff in there. I look forward to reading more of your comics.

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Matchbook_Romance
August 6, 2003 2:06 PM

Sorry, I didn't mean Hell as down under... it had nothing to do with the South, or Australia or anything. LoL! Thanks for more advice!

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Matchbook_Romance
August 9, 2003 11:13 AM

Read Awards Shuffle 1-5 =D

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Shadow_Artist
August 9, 2003 1:17 PM

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Also, don't end sentences with ellipses...

It makes the comic feel too loose, in my opinion. Punchlines are better with a period at the end.



Offering a different point of view, I would personally disagree. Whilst nothing can beat a good punchline, ellipses are comic gold if used correctly. Sometimes, implication can be funnier than statement.

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