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| After turning off the stove with my hand, I couldn't escape the hot pan so I got burned. | |
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| How sad. But you don't need to say,"with my hand." | |
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| Well, that's a fine how-do-you-do. Well I know not to come to you with my problems any more! | |
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| You should probably vary your sentence beginnings too. | |
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