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| I finished the edits on your book. Let me know what you think. | |
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| Oh, thank you so much, you are the best editor, I love you! | |
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| You cut almost half of my book! | |
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| I didn't, I just cut the parts that I felt weren't helpful to the plot. | |
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| NOT helpful to the plot, it's all helpful!!! | |
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| No, it wasn't, some of it is just gratuitous and should be cut. It'll help the book, I promise. | |
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