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| My teacher told me to come to Writing Center because she, like, doesn't appreciate my *voice*. She says I use unncessarily superfluous highbrow vocabulary inappropropriately. | |
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| I'm so glad you understand! So what do you think of this paper? I need to get like your approval, so my teacher knows that you think it's good. | |
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| I think it would be a better essay if it had punctuation. Also, make it half as long and say twice as much. | |
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| Here's my paper! The Writing Center lady said it was awesome. She told me it only had to be 2 pages. | |
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