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There once was a man on the moon named Thomas. He never paused for breath while talking to aliens. One day, a fluent alien came up to him and the two started chatting about life on earth.
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| The earth is blue green pretty and big with lots of water and some land made by volcanoes and is really awesome to live in because of the diversity and beauty. | |
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| ... Was that one sentence?! | |
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| Yes it was a whole sentence did you not understand because a lot of people don’t understand me when I talk and I don’t understand why because I think I speak pretty clearly. | |
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| You talk so fast and you don't pause for breath. You also add a lot of and's to make it sound more complete. You need to take a breath, shown by commas. | |
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