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lukket
Home Computer Futurist

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Here's a new series inspired by my entries in CC 233 (look there for spoilers)

Unseen: episode 1 - scene 1 by lukket
4-07-04
I'm sorry mam, but your son was killed instantly. Nothing we can do about that.
You mean... he's dead?
That appears to be the case, but maybe Doctor Bizarro can help you.
Doctor Bizarro?
I sense money and grave trouble ahead. Mmm... money...
Mmm... grave trouble...

Unseen: episode 1 - scene 2 by lukket
4-07-04
I came to you because my son is dead.
I'm saddened to hear of your loss.
I hoped you could help me instead of dispensing condolences!
Nobody can undo God's decisions!
But I'm willing to pay.
Meet me at midnight by his grave. Bring a blank cheque!

Unseen: episode 1 - scene 3 by lukket
4-07-04
Here's the cheque
Thank you.
What now? Aren't you going to do something?
Oh yes. I nearly forgot. I'll leave you with your son. Whatever you say, don't use the word "see", or something bad may happen!
Hi Mark! I never thought I'd see you again.
Noooo...

Unseen: episode 1 - scene 4 by lukket
4-07-04
Nothing bad happened?
Apparently not
God bless Doctor Bizarro. I paid for him to save your life.
What did you pay with?
Uh... a blank cheque?
Noooo...

Unseen: episode 1 - scene 5 by lukket
4-07-04
Seven years later...
Aw man. That movie was great!
Yeah. I think Mark Hamill has a great future ahead of him!
Mark who?
You know. The guy that played Han Solo.
That was Harrison Ford!
Harrison who?

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troelsea at gmail dot com

4-07-04 12:31pm (new)
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lukket
Home Computer Futurist

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Unseen: episode 1 - scene 6 by lukket
4-07-04
Let's face it. We don't go well together.
I guess you're right.
I mean, we don't notice the same things in a movie.
Yeah. It's not like we ever agree.
Yeah. Exactly. We would just fight if we dated regularly.
Yeah. I hate fighting.

Unseen: episode 1 - scene 7 by lukket
4-07-04
To get in the right break-up mood, let's say what's wrong with eachother.
Good idea. I hate it ... um ... when you're not around!
You know, I hate it even more when YOU are not around! Take that!
I ... I hate your ... um ... farts!
Oh where should I start... There are so many things ... like ... you know ... I hate disco!
Oh yeah. Me too.

Unseen: episode 1 - scene 8 by lukket
4-07-04
Well, let's not fight. Let's agree to break up as friends.
Yeah. That's cool and mature.
My parents are away tonight. Do you want to come home to my place and celebrate our break-up?
Yeah.
And tomorrow we can begin seeing other people!
Yeah. That's going to be a relief!

Unseen: episode 1 - scene 9 by lukket
4-07-04
Great dinner. You're a marvelous cook!
My pleasure.
I wish I could find a boy-friend who would cook for me!
Yeah. I wish I could find a girl-friend who would appreciate my food.
Well. I'm sure you'll find her.
I hope that too, but I don't think I'll ever be that lucky.

Unseen: episode 1 - scene 10 by lukket
4-07-04
So, this is my bedroom.
Hey, it's nice! It's getting hot in here.
So take off all your clothes.
After you.
There. I still feel hot, though...
Yeah. You are.

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troelsea at gmail dot com

4-07-04 12:33pm (new)
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lukket
Home Computer Futurist

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Unseen: episode 1 - scene 11 by lukket
4-07-04
Do you want to try my bed?
Why not. That seems like a thing a friend would do.
Hold my hand in a friendly manner.
Alright. Hey... that's not my hand!!?
Should I stop?
Yes ... please ... but ... not ... yet ...

Unseen: episode 1 - scene 12 by lukket
4-07-04
You're welcome to stay for the night.
I don't know. We're just friends, right?
Yeah. Friends stay over all the time without any worries.
And I'm still a virgin. I plan to stay that way until I marry.
So do I. Hmm... look at the size of that thing...
I'll ... oh my ... stay ... then.

Unseen: episode 1 - scene 13 by lukket
4-07-04
The next morning...
That was my best break-up ever!
Yeah. Mine too.
But what we did was wrong.
Yeah. We'll never do it again.
You mean the pre-marital sex??!
No, lose our virginity.

Unseen: episode 1 - scene 14 by lukket
4-07-04
Oh my! What time is it?
It's 7 A.M.
My parents are coming home in fifteen minutes! I don't want them to see you here.
I understand. I'll turn the lights on and get dressed.
Hey!? Where did you go, Mark?
I'm right here, Lucy! Where are you?

Unseen: episode 1 - scene 15 by lukket
4-07-04
You must be joking. Where do you hide? Ouch!
Where do YOU hide?
Oh shit! I can't even see my own arm!
I can't see mine either. We've turned invisible??
We can still see other people, right?
Maybe, but can they see us?

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troelsea at gmail dot com

4-07-04 12:34pm (new)
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