This is my new series, ended already. I hope you like it!

The Virtual RPG Episode 1 by crazymalicous 6-07-05

That thing your wearing looks like the pee suit my Grandpa wears when he gets too excited. Uhm... it's not a pee suit. What is it then? A SuperNova Hyper Duality Reflux Testing Shooter Double X4 Powered Processer of Graphics Reality System RPG. It's a virtual reality videogame suit. It puts you in the middle of an RPG. Have fun with that now. OK. Here goes nothing....

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The Virtual Reality RPG Episode 2 by crazymalicous 6-08-05

When we last left our hero he was putting on his Virtual Reality Suit for his new game Virtual Reality RPG. Now he is transferring between his world and the next. Maybe Jeff was right. They do use this thing as a pee suit because you get so scared in the vortex of terror... let's not go into details. Oh my god! My suit is off... I'm stuck in the game. *pssss* Oh pee suit, I need your heavy duty protection!

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The Virtual Reality RPG Episode 3 by crazymalicous 6-08-05

When we last left Kyle he had entered the game but he was stuck in it! How will he get out? The suspense is killing me! Oh look. Fire. I need to get past it! Soon Kyle came to a wise old man's home. You must find the ICE STAFF to get past the WALL OF FIRE. Yeah... anything else? You must find the ICE STAFF to get past the WALL OF FIRE. Yeah... this is going nowhere.

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The Virtual Reality RPG Episode 4 by crazymalicous 6-08-05

When we last left our hero Kyle he was trying to get some valubale info out of the wise old man on how to pass the wall of fire. They are still arguing. You must find the ICE STAFF to get past the WALL OF FIRE. Hey aren't you that guy from Super Mario Brothers? Um... no comment. Hey!!!!!!! He finally said something! After 5 hours he said something different! Ok ok... I'm unemployed and I really needed the work. Now my bro Luigi has the spotlight. Ever seen a new Mario Tennis game lately? They renamed it Luigi's Tennis featuring Anna Kournikova. Poor, poor, sap.

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The Virtual Reality RPG Episode 5 by crazymalicous 6-08-05

When we last left our hero Kyle he was talking to Mario about where he could find the Ice Staff to freeze the Wall of Fire. His best guess: cheezy looking angel. Hello. I heard you owned the Ice Staff. Staff is not a nice word. Uh... it isn't? No it refers to the male reproductive organ. What if I said Ice Piece of Wood? No, that sounds like your referring to an erection. Am I bringing you sexual pleasure?

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rest in next post down

here's 6-10

The Virtual Reality RPG Episode 6 by crazymalicous 6-08-05

When we last left our hero Kyle he was asking Angel if he had the Ice Staff. It ended with them talking about Kyle getting... aroused. So you think that I am getting a boner because of you? Don't say boner it's not a nice world. God help me... Just give me the fucking Ice Staff. Ok here. Humph.

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The Virtual Reality RPG Episode 7 by crazymalicous 6-08-05

When we last left our hero Kyle he had gotten the Ice Staff from Angel, the very strange angel guy. Now let's see the battle. Kyle-0 Fire-0 I will vanquish you fire! I have the Ice Staff! Wait wait... you think you will kill me with that? Yeah right! BURN! Kyle-0 Fire-1 Booyah! Bwahahahahah! Ow.

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The Virtual RPG Episode 8 really, not azn_lo_pan's copy one by crazymalicous 6-08-05

When we last left Kyle he lost a fight with the fire. He got burned up. So sad. Where am I? You are at a PokeHospital! Did you keep my Ice Staff? Um... your Ice Staff? Am I making you feel aroused? *sigh* Not this again god... Let's go at it, you big pimp!

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The Virtual Reality RPG Episode 10 LAST ONE by crazymalicous 6-08-05

When we last left our hero Kyle he did it with some blonde and they made a baby. Yay. The baby holds secret info. By the way this is the last Virtual Reality RPG. I had a lot of fun with this series. He's so cute! I will name him Heff. I found your Virtual Reality Suit. OH MY GOD! GIVE ME THE SUIT! Here. I'm comin' home! Bye Heff. Oh what was I thinking. Come along with me, Heff! And you too, Blondey! Yay!

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Of course there will be a new series featuring this quirky family. Look for it soon!

OMG sorry i forgot number nine here it is

The Virtual Reality RPG Episode 9 ONE MORE LEFT! OWNAGE! by crazymalicous 6-08-05

When we last left Kyle he was in a hospital with a really hot chick. She asked him if he wanted to get down. He accepted. Wow. That was amazing. Um... did you wear a condom? Oh damn it! Oh no...

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#9 wasn't really necessary. It wasn't funny and didn't help the story.

The comics in this series were pretty blah, although #5 and #6 were good, and #8 was quite good. I liked that you brought the reader up to speed in each comic -- thereby making them individually readable -- but you could've done it in a more graceful way than writing a little novella in each narration box.

Still, I'm happy to say you don't suck. Pretty good job.

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