What the **** do you know about poetry or writing or even me?
You know jack ****.
More than rhyme you say? as you cna see there is an "under construction" sign. I am still adding my writings to my site. And those poems that is one there, they do a bloody hell of alot more than rhyme. They are every person's deepest feelings at some point. If you read them careful and look, you can find hidding messages, hidden meanings, and a whole lot more.
So, you do not have a write to tell me that my poetry is crap, or i dont know how to write.
You look at those and see crap and depressing things. Other people look at those and feel moved and touched by what is said. They can relate to it.
So, i suggest you shut your ****ing mouth. Cause unlike you, im a writer.
"Leave the past behind and focus on the future, but live in the present"