Just want to get some feedback. Too cliche? Not leet enough? Too obscure? Not obscure enough? (And yes, the bible quote in my second comic *is* real.)
Thanks.
-V

Mine start here:

Memento in Three Panels by Vekktor 9-27-01

BANG! Owww! Must... find... pen... They say that venereal disease can cause short-term memory loss, so maybe your wife... BANG! Owww!

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Memento in Three Panels has been done before, but that's not a bad version of it.
Today in Bible History is very good. In fact, it could have almost been an entry for a comic contest I ran recently...

I think it was your contest that got me thinking about it. But the idea had been bouncing around in my head for a while (ever since I found that particular verse).

re: Memento
crap.. oh well.. that'll teach me to wait for DVD...

Thanks for taking the time.

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I like this one (and a few others)...

Mirror mirror... by Vekktor 9-27-01

At home... I love my new mirror... ...with Nick... Hmm... I think I'll spend the evening getting dressed up... ... the transvestite. I'll start with the chiffon and lace, then maybe we'll bring out our Mr. Butt Plug... There's a nice big artery inside my thigh here...

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"And Wirthling isn't worth the paper he isn't printed on."

I saw the title and refused to read it.

Sorry, haven't seen the film yet.

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DexX:
I can dig that. I hate spoilers myself. There shouldn't be any in the comic, but if you (or anyone else) wants to skip that comic, start here:

Today in Bible History by Vekktor 9-27-01

1 Samuel 6:17 "And these are the golden hemorrhoids which the Philistines returned for a trespass offering unto the LORD:..." Lord, the Philistines dropped these off at the front door. Hmmm.. pass 'em around to the believers outside... Here everyone! A little perk for your investment! Yaaayyyy..... You gotta treat your people right... Hey, these are HEMMORRHOIDS!

Besides, I think "Today in Bible History" is a better comic anyway...

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Wow. All I have to do is post this innocuous little message, and suddenly this thread is back on top with a star.. magic...

But seriously, if you can manage to wade through the CC stuff, feedback on my toons is still appreciated.

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