The Search for SeaWeed by MadMan 10-05-01

As Redfish searches for SeaWeed Dude, can I go with ya, huh! Can I, CAN I, HUH? Now you know it could be dangerous! Bluefish tries to convince him I can hold my own. What about that Striped Bass...I kicked his ASS! Yeah Bluefish, but there's Sharks in THESE waters! Not knowing the horror that awaits heh...heh...heh...heh... I aint afraid o' no Shark! I'll spot him a mile away, sneak up on him, and BEAT HIM DOWN!

This is my first.

It was rather spontaneous and I just went with it, so bare with me.

It's a 9 part C-Strip.

Like I said, I just went with it and when I was done with one, another came to mind, then another...etc.

I didn't want to make it that long, it just happened.

Now that it's done, wut d'ya think?

Is it shit, or not...lemme kno!

PEACE,
\m/MadMan\m/

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The sharks slowly encroaching from the left was kind of fun, but the angry ghetto kid dialect and most of the humor were kind of lost on me... I *understand* it, I just don't find it funny. Though I did find the idea of a dolphin/shark gangwar kind of humorsome... kind of.

I think I am going to have to use the Sunscreen Song line again....

Don't overuse narration.

If I could offer only one piece of advice to people using SC.com for the first time, that would be it.

...basically, it makes us feel like you think we're dumb. We can see what's going on in the strip, so you really don't have to tell us.

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Please excuse 'da ghetto shit', as I'm Brooklyn born, I thought it was funny!

I have some more ideas, just need some time to put em together.

I'll keep in mind to not use the 'narration' like I did.

Thanx fer the input guys!

PEACE!

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No problem, mate. That narration thing is probably the number one problem I have noticed in strips by people who are actually capable of making good ones, and a few of the regulars did it early on before realising it was superfluous. Thanks for taking our advice in good humour, too. The number of people who come on the forum, say "Hey! You like my strips?" and get pissed off with honest replies...

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