I have something serious wrong with my mind... but look forward to some input...

There is some very funny shit on this page...

i have about 5 scenes posted of an ongoing strip...

I will post them here.... hope you all enjoy them.

http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?author=Dractul

Thanks for any and ALL input... and jests, and slams.. and curses.

Let me know if you actually want to see more.

Not completely without merit, I suppose. But they don't really make any sense and are lacking in any solid jokes.

Oh, and was somebody pointing a gun at your head forcing you to use EVERY SINGLE narration box?

Scientific experiments on the atomic elements that comprise comics have found that excessive amounts of Narration (Nr) inhibit the reaction of humour in the reader's brain, and can render otherwise potent and reactive comic strips completely neutral and ineffective.

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Here are some educational comics that may help...

Closed Narration for the intellectually challenged. by Drexle 10-29-01

There are two asian girls in this panel. I just wanted to point that out in case you are blind or stupid or something. Look, Asiangirl1 speaks! She appears to be soliciting sex for money... just in case you're deaf. Herro sojah boy! Sucky sucky fi dolla, me love you long time! Now she has caught on fire and is burning! I had to clarify just in case you though the fire was screaming. Argh I'm burning! She burns with passionate desire for my tender loins.

Anatomy of a bad comic: Redundant narration, empty punchline by evil_d 9-15-01

Jesus and Satan are talking. Hi, Satan. Hi, Jesus. Jesus wants to go to the ball game. Want to go to the ball game tonight? Sure. Jesus remembers he doesn't have any money so Satan has to pay for them both! I don't have any money! Dammit!

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"And Wirthling isn't worth the paper he isn't printed on."

Actually, I read back over Dractul's comics and found that the narration wasn't too much overdone. The main problem is that random nonsense gets old pretty quick unless you can throw in something truly unique and funny. The series wasn't all bad, though.

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"And Wirthling isn't worth the paper he isn't printed on."

There was a certain studiedness to the nonsensicality. God help me, I kind of liked it.

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There were a few choice lines, "Promises, promises," being chief among them. I must say also that the tentacle coming out of the door in the laboratory was inspired and I don't think I've actually seen that used on this site before.

Unfortunately, the presentation lacked a certain something that kept them from being truly funny. Probably the overuse of narration.

Great I need help... thanks!

Will work on some actual punch lines. - however I am one of those... who need like 6 boxes or so to get a whole joke out... still dealing with the 3 box concept... ug.

At least some of you ... seemed to get something out of it.. other than it was all drivel.

I think in my 250 comics I have hade less than 100 punchlines. I forget them.

at least this dude didnt say his comics suck like most newbies do.

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You typed an extra zero in there.

You typed an extra zero in there.

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that WAS actually a typo. I meant to say 10.

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