Please can you read my first ever comic strip and tell what I need to improve.

IMPORTANT-I DO NOT LIKE THE OUSBOURNES, NEVER WILL NEVER HAVE.

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I WON MS.MICROWAVE!

You might want to improve your spelling, it's a bit shit.

I can't spell, apart from that I suppose it is alright.

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I WON MS.MICROWAVE!

doesn't really go anywhere does it?

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There's a fine line between visionary and wacko ~ greinhart

I already did one on the Osbournes yesterday

Hurry Up and Get Cancelled.. by EvilErnie 8-12-03

SHARON!!!! zzzafle doofle SHIT werzzzitgoing saffrrzapple DAMNIT shiffle stoofoo JACK! Ozzy, where are you going? I need you to listen to my complaining! NEXT TIME ON: The Osbournes SHARON!!!! Shoorforloople zzeefit shorpoo WHISKEY szachterfittsh shofterbloopz DAMN DOG forkleffipper bangboombah STUPID NEIGHBORS! Ozzy! Jack's in rehab again!

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"You tried your best and you failed miserably! The lesson is: Never try!" -Homer Simpson

And I have to agree, the spelling is really bad

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"You tried your best and you failed miserably! The lesson is: Never try!" -Homer Simpson